- I can work with a partner to select a focus statement and concrete and sensory language for my literary analysis essay. (W.5.2a, W.5.2b)
- I can read aloud an excerpt of The Most Beautiful Roof in the World with accuracy and fluency. (RF.5.4)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- RL.5.1: Quote accurately from a text when explaining what the text says explicitly and when drawing inferences from the text.
- RF.5.4: Read with sufficient accuracy and fluency to support comprehension.
- RF.5.4a: Read grade-level text with purpose and understanding.
- RF.5.4c: Use context to confirm or self-correct word recognition and understanding, rereading as necessary.
- W.5.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
- W.5.2a: Introduce a topic clearly, provide a general observation and focus, and group related information logically; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
- W.5.9: Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research.
- W.5.9a: Apply grade 5 Reading standards to literature (e.g., "Compare and contrast two or more characters, settings, or events in a story or a drama, drawing on specific details in the text [e.g., how characters interact]").
- L.5.5: Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings.
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- Colored-in Model Essay: Concrete and Sensory Language in The Great Kapok Tree (W.5.2)
- Sticky note with chosen focus statement (W.5.2a)
- Highlighted Explaining Quotes: Concrete and Sensory Language note-catcher (W.5.2b)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) B. Engaging the Reader: Model Essay (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Reading for Gist and Analyzing the Model Essay: The Painted Essay (20 minutes) B. Planning a Literary Analysis Essay: Selecting a Focus Statement and Quotes (20 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Reading Fluency: The Most Beautiful Roof in the World, Page 28 (10 minutes) 4. Homework A. Concrete and Sensory Language II: Gather concrete and sensory language from your independent reading book (either research or choice) on the note-catcher. B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt to respond to in the front of your independent reading journal. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas in which students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Create the Focus Statement Options for display by choosing two to four focus statements from students' Exit Ticket: Focus Statement from Lesson 6.
- Strategically pair students for writing their literary analysis for the rest of the unit.
- Post: Learning targets, Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart, and Fluent Readers Do These Things anchor chart.
Tech and Multimedia
- Work Time A: For students who benefit from hearing the text read aloud multiple times, consider using a text-to-speech tool like Natural Reader, SpeakIt! for Google Chrome, or the Safari reader. Note that to use a web-based text-to-speech tool like SpeakIt! or Safari reader, you will need to create an online doc, such as a Google Doc, containing the text.
- Work Time A: Students analyze the text in a word processing document, such as a Google Doc, and change the color of the text according to the structure.
- Work Time B: Students complete the note-catcher in a word processing document, such as a Google Doc.
- Closing and Assessment A: Record students reading the text aloud using software or apps such as Audacity or GarageBand.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 5.I.B.6a, 5.I.B.7, 5.I.C.11, 5.II.A.1
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs with opportunities to discuss the gist of each paragraph of a new model essay as well as visuals to analyze the structure of the essay.
- ELLs may find identifying the parts of the essay challenging because they will first need to understand the meaning of the essay they are analyzing. See suggestions in the lesson.
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- Consider asking students to create a graphic that shows how US essay structure is similar to and different from conventional essay structures in other countries.
- Consider asking students to create a graphic that shows how this essay structure is similar to and different from other structures, such as narrative structure.
For heavier support:
- Highlight the sentences in the model essay that contain the introduction, focus statement, first piece of evidence, second piece of evidence, and conclusion in advance. Invite students to write the appropriate label next to each. Consider discussing, acting out, sketching, and paraphrasing the meaning of some key sentences from the model essay before class so that students can more fully participate. Copy the introduction, focus statement, first piece of evidence, second piece of evidence, and conclusion from the model essay onto separate strips of paper in advance. Scramble the strips and invite students to put them back in the proper order and label them.
- Consider providing students with a recording of the fluency passages from Closing and Assessment and Homework in Lessons 7-11. Allow them to practice reading aloud with the recorded text.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation: Offer a variety of representations to help facilitate comprehension of new vocabulary introduced in this lesson. Connect the idea of structure to architecture. Say: "Just like authors structure their writing based on their purpose, architects build structures to suit how people will use them." When practicing fluency, consider using phrasing arcs in your model and in the text to help visually convey appropriate phrasing for students.
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression: Consider differentiated ways for students to analyze the structure of the model text. Example: Highlight sentences in the model text and have students label the focus statement, pieces of evidence, and conclusion. Another option is to write the sentences on sentence strips and have students put them in the order that makes the most sense. By engaging with the model text in these different ways, students have more opportunities to practice analyzing text.
- Multiple Means of Engagement: In Work Time A, students use colored pencils to mark up the model text based on their analysis. Students then share out their responses in a group discussion and are encouraged to go back and revise their text. Some students may feel embarrassed if they made errors with the colored pencil that they cannot erase. Minimize risk by providing a new, unmarked copy of the model text for students to revise their analysis.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
- structure, accuracy, fluency, literary analysis (L)
Materials
- Model Essay: Concrete and Sensory Language in The Great Kapok Tree (one per student and one to display)
- Modified Model Essay: Concrete and Sensory Language in The Great Kapok Tree (optional; for students needing additional support; see Teaching Notes)
- Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- Colored pencils: red, green, yellow, blue (one of each per student)
- Model Essay: Concrete and Sensory Language in The Great Kapok Tree (example, for teacher reference)
- Markers: red, green, yellow, blue (one of each per student)
- Explaining Quotes: Concrete and Sensory Language note-catcher (from Lesson 6; one per student)
- Focus Statement Options (one to display; see In Advance section)
- Informative Writing Planning graphic organizer (one per student and one to display)
- Explaining Quotes: Concrete and Sensory Language Note-catcher: Class Version (from Lesson 6)
- Excerpt of Pages 41-42 of The Most Beautiful Roof in the World (from Lesson 5; one per student)
- Informative Writing Planning graphic organizer (example, for teacher reference)
- Fluent Readers Do These Things anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- The Most Beautiful Roof in the World (one per student)
Materials from Previous Lessons
New Materials
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
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A. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)
"What is the translation of structure in our home languages?" (estructura in Spanish) Invite students to use their translation dictionary if necessary. Call on volunteers to share. Ask other students to choose one translation to quietly repeat. Invite students to say their chosen translation out loud when you give the signal. Chorally repeat the translations and the word in English. Invite self- and peer correction of the pronunciation of the translations and the English. "What does structure mean?" (the way something is put together) "Why would we want to analyze the structure of a piece of model writing?" (so that we can apply that structure to our own work to make it as effective as the model) "How can we use the Painted Essay structure to analyze writing?" (It helps us see how the essay is put together; we can identify the different components and the content of each component, which can help us to structure our own work.)
"What does it mean to read with accuracy and fluency?" (to read smoothly without making many mistakes) |
"How do these images demonstrate different structures?" Connect this to writing by saying that authors structure their writing differently based on the writer's purpose just like architects build different structures based on how they will be used. (MMR)
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B. Engaging the Reader: Model Essay (5 minutes)
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Work Time
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A. Reading for Gist and Analyzing the Model Essay: The Painted Essay (20 minutes)
"Why do you think that is the introduction?" "Why do you think that is the focus statement?"
"Why do you think that is the introduction?" (because it introduces the title of the book and the author and briefly explains what it is about)
"What type of writing piece is this essay: is it a narrative piece, informational piece, or opinion piece? What in the model essay makes you think so?" (It is an informational piece because it explains how Lynn Cherry's descriptions help the reader to better understand the rainforest.)
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B. Planning a Literary Analysis Essay: Selecting a Focus Statement and Quotes (20 minutes)
"In the focus statement, the author makes a claim. How has the author of this essay supported the claim made in the focus statement? Why?" (with quotes from the text and reasoning to support the claim) "What quotes has the author chosen? Why?" (quotes that include concrete and sensory language--specifically quotes about things the characters can hear and quotes about things the characters can see, as stated in the focus statement)
"What if the author hadn't included these quotes from the text and reasoning to support the claim? I'll give you time to think and discuss with a partner." (The reader might not trust the claim that the author is making, and it might be more difficult to "see" or understand reasoning behind the focus statement.) "Who can tell us what your classmate said in your own words?" (Responses will vary.)
"Selecting a focus statement and underlined evidence may be difficult. To make it easier, you can take a few minutes to talk about this with a partner who shares your home language. Then we can share in English. _____ (student's name), since you are the only student who is able to speak in wonderful _____ (e.g., Urdu), feel free to think quietly or write in _____ (e.g., Urdu)."
"What evidence do you have from the text to support the claim made in that focus statement?" "How does that evidence support the claim?"
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Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Reading Fluency: The Most Beautiful Roof in the World, Page 28 (10 minutes)
"What is the gist of this excerpt? What is it mostly about?" (The boys swim in a green pool, and when James stands up, an owl butterfly lands on his head.)
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Homework
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A. Concrete and Sensory Language II: Gather concrete and sensory language from your independent reading book (either research or choice) on the note-catcher. B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt to respond to in the front of your independent reading journal. |
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