- I can plan an essay that states an opinion and has reasons that are supported by facts and details. (W.5.1, W.5.4, W.5.9b)
- I can give kind, helpful, and specific feedback to my partner. (W.5.5, SL.5.1)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- W.5.1: Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information.
- W.5.1a: Introduce a topic or text clearly, state an opinion, and create an organizational structure in which ideas are logically grouped to support the writer's purpose.
- W.5.1b: Provide logically ordered reasons that are supported by facts and details.
- W.5.4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
- W.5.5: With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.
- W.5.9: Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research.
- W.5.9b: Apply grade 5 Reading standards to informational texts (e.g., "Explain how an author uses reasons and evidence to support particular points in a text, identifying which reasons and evidence support which point[s]"").
- SL.5.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 5 topics and texts, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- Opinion Writing Planning graphic organizer (W.5.1, W.5.4, W.5.5, W.5.9b)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Guided Practice: Planning an Opinion Essay (15 minutes) B. Independent Practice: Planning an Opinion Essay (25 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment C. Peer Critique: Opinion Writing Planning (15 minutes) 4. Homework A. Complete the Introductory Elements I in your Unit 2 Homework. B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas where students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Strategically pair students for the peer critique in the Closing with at least one strong reader per pair.
- Review the Opinion Writing Checklist (see the Tools page).
- Post: Learning targets and applicable anchor charts (see Materials list).
Tech and Multimedia
- Continue to use the technology tools recommended throughout Modules 1-2 to create anchor charts to share with families; to record students as they participate in discussions and protocols to review with students later and to share with families; and for students to listen to and annotate text, record ideas on note-catchers, and word-process writing.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 5.I.A.1, 5.I.A.3, 5.I.A.4, 5.I.A.5, 5.I.C.10, 5.I.C.11, 5.I.C.12, 5.II.A.1, 5.II.A.2, 5.II.C.6, and 5.II.C.7
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs by referring to the Factors for Success anchor chart from Unit 1 to plan their essays, inviting students to draw on conclusions from the text-based discussion to form their focus statements, allowing time for discussion throughout the lesson, and explicitly reviewing the characteristics of opinion writing as a class.
- ELLs may find it challenging to go from annotating the Model Essay: Branch Rickey in Work Time A to planning their own opinion essays with the graphic organizer in Work Time B without having seen this process modeled. Consider filling in the graphic organizer with components of the model essay in Work Time A, providing students with concrete examples to refer to during their planning (see Meeting Students' Needs).
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- Encourage students to use the focus structure from the Language Dive in Lesson 9, but it was _____, to write their focus statement, supporting students in using linking words and phrases to connect ideas. Challenge students to think of more than one way they could use this linking language to write their focus statement.
For heavier support:
- Consider color-coding the text in the displayed Opinion Writing Planning graphic organizer to match the corresponding information in the Painted Essay(r) template, signaling the information that goes in each section. For example, in the introduction paragraph box, the text "What context do you need to give to your reader?" would be color-coded red; "State your opinion:" would be green; all text in "Proof Paragraph 1" would be yellow; etc.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation (MMR): Students provide kind, helpful, and specific feedback during a peer critique of their opinion writing planning. As this familiar learning target is displayed, consider inviting students to share examples of this type of feedback from previous lessons and note their responses for visual display.
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression (MMAE): Continue to support a range of fine motor abilities and writing needs by offering students options for writing utensils. Also, consider supporting students' expressive skills by offering partial dictation of student responses.
- Multiple Means of Engagement (MME): Since peer review can be threatening to some students, continue to emphasize the benefits of peer review and feedback for all students. Make this activity relevant by reminding students that writers have editors who provide feedback for their writing through each step in the writing process, which improves their writing.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
- states, support, specific, reason, evidence, use my strengths (L)
Materials
- Close Readers Do These Things anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- Academic Word Wall (begun in Module 1)
- Vocabulary logs (from Module 1; one per student)
- Opinion Writing Planning graphic organizer (one per student and one to display)
- Model Essay: Branch Rickey (from Lesson 9; one per student and one to display)
- Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- Directions for Opinion Essay (from Lesson 9; one per student and one to display)
- Opinion Writing Checklist (from Lesson 9; one per student and one to display)
- Colored pencils (green, yellow, blue; one of each color per student)
- Preparing for a Text-Based Discussion: Jackie Robinson note-catcher (from Lesson 7; one per student)
- Discussion Notes Form: Jackie Robinson (from Lesson 8; one per student)
- Promises to Keep (from Unit 1, Lesson 1; one per student)
- "This I Believe: Free Minds and Hearts at Work" (text; from Lesson 2; one per student)
- Listening Closely: "Jackie Robinson: Royals to Obamas" note-catcher (from Lesson 4; one per student)
- Factor for Success anchor charts (begun in Unit 1)
- Domain-Specific Word Wall (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 1)
- Opinion Writing Planning graphic organizer (example, for teacher reference)
- Sticky notes (two per student)
- Working to Contribute to a Better World anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- Directions for Peer Critique (from Module 1; one to display)
- Peer Critique Protocol anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- Language Dive I Practice: Model Essay: Branch Rickey homework (from Lesson 9; one per student)
- Language Dive I Practice: Model Essay: Branch Rickey homework (example, for teacher reference)
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
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A. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)
"Ian plan an essay that states an opinion and has reasons that are supported by facts and details." "I can give kind, helpful, and specific feedback to my partner."
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Work Time
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A. Guided Practice: Planning an Opinion Essay (15 minutes)
"How is this graphic organizer similar to other writing graphic organizers we have used this year?" (Responses will vary, but may include: It has a focus question and focus statement. There are four paragraphs. There is space to record the sources we will use in our writing.) "How is this graphic organizer different from other writing graphic organizers we have used?" (Responses will vary, but may include: Each proof paragraph will be about a reason for our opinion; facts and evidence we include will support each reason.)
"Which sentence in this paragraph most clearly states the author's opinion?" ("There were many factors that led to Rickey's success, but it was support from others in baseball that was most important.")
"How do you know this statement is an opinion?" (It says what the author thinks the most important factor in Rickey's success was; someone could disagree or have a different point of view.)
"Which sentences in this paragraph most clearly state a reason for the author's opinion?" ("One person who was very important in Branch Rickey's success in integrating baseball was the commissioner of baseball at the time, A. B. (Happy) Chandler. At a time when few supported integrated baseball, Chandler supported Rickey's plan to break the color barrier."; "With someone so high up in baseball agreeing to integrate the game, Chandler was a key person in Rickey's success.")
"What evidence does the author give to support his reason?" ("Judge Kenesaw Mountain Landis was the commissioner of baseball when Rickey first proposed desegregating the major leagues. As Sharon Robinson writes in Promises to Keep, though, he was 'firmly against it.' (p. 27). After Landis died and Chandler became commissioner, Rickey again proposed desegregating baseball and Chandler agreed.")
"Which sentences in this paragraph most clearly state another reason for the author's opinion?" ("Another group of people that led to Rickey's success were sportswriters. They were some of the first people to call for an end to segregation in baseball and provided support to Rickey and Robinson along the way."; "Without the help and support of the sportswriters of the time, Rickey may not have found Jackie Robinson.") "What evidence does the author give to support his reason?" ("In Promises to Keep, Sharon Robinson names Wendell Smith, Frank A. Young, Art Cohn, Sam Lacy, and Shirley Povich as just a few of the sportswriters of the time who 'wrote daily articles on the injustice of segregation within professional sports' (p. 24). They asked their readers and the American public to consider: 'Could baseball truly be considered America's pastime when black ballplayers and white ballplayers couldn't play on the same field?' (p. 25). When choosing a player to bring into the major leagues, Rickey relied on the knowledge of sportswriters--all of whom agreed that Jackie Robinson had the ability to play in the major leagues and was the right man for the job.")
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"Can we say this sentence in a different order? How?" "How does your understanding of this sentence add to your understanding of the factors for Branch Rickey's success?"
"How can we use this sentence structure in our speaking and writing?"
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B. Independent Practice: Planning an Opinion Essay (25 minutes)
"What is the topic of your essay?" (which factor we think was most important in Jackie Robinson's success in leading social change)
"Are there any specific criteria that you should be aware of and list in that column on the checklist?" (Responses will vary, but may include: Clearly state that the factor I think was most important in Jackie's success in the focus statement.)
"Which was the most important factor (or factors) for Jackie Robinson's success in leading social change?"
"In your opinion, which factor was most important in Jackie Robinson's success?" "What reasons do you have for this opinion?"
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Closing & Assessments
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A. Peer Critique: Opinion Writing Planning (15 minutes)
"What do each of these criteria mean in your own words?"
Use a checking for understanding technique (e.g., Red Light, Green Light or Thumb-O-Meter) for students to self-assess against the second learning target and to self-assess against how well they collaborated and used their strengths in this lesson.
"How does our peer critique add to your understanding of planning for opinion writing? I'll give you time to think and discuss with a partner." (Responses will vary.)
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Homework
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