- I can write an introduction paragraph for my informative piece that describes my expert group animal, its habitat, and its predators, and has a focus statement that tells the topic of my writing. (W.4.2, W.4.4, W.4.5, W.4.7, W.4.9b)
- I can use modal auxiliaries to express the condition of verbs. (L.4.1c)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- W.4.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
- W.4.2a: Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
- W.4.2b: Develop the topic with facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples related to the topic.
- W.4.4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
- W.4.5: With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing.
- W.4.7: Conduct short research projects that build knowledge through investigation of different aspects of a topic.
- W.4.9: Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research.
- W.4.9b: Apply grade 4 Reading standards to informational texts (e.g., "Explain how an author uses reasons and evidence to support particular points in a text").
- L.4.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
- L.4.1c: Use modal auxiliaries (e.g., can, may, must) to convey various conditions.
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- Draft of introduction paragraph (W.4.2, W.4.4, W.4.5, W.4.7, W.4.9b)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Engaging the Writer and Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Examining a Model Introduction (15 minutes) B. Guided Practice: Writing a Focus Statement (10 minutes) C. Drafting an Introduction Paragraph (25 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Third Draft of Sketch (5 minutes) 4. Homework A. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. B. For ELLs: Complete the Language Dive Part 2 Practice in your Unit 2 Homework. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas where students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Review the Informative Page Directions.
- Post: Informational Texts anchor chart; learning targets.
Tech and Multimedia
- Work Time C: Allow students to type their first drafts using Google Docs or other word processing software.
- Work Time C: Students complete their drafts in a word processing document, for example a Google Doc using Speech to Text facilities activated on devices, or using an app or software like Dictation.io.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 4.I.A.1, 4.I.A.3, 4.I.C.10, 4.I.C.11, 4.I.C.12, 4.II.A.1, 4.II.B.3
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs with explicit instruction around the language of introductions.
- ELLs may find it challenging to write an introduction using U.S. conventions. Call special attention to the name and purpose of each piece of the introduction. See Levels of support and the Meeting Students' Needs column for suggestions.
- In Work Time B, ELLs are invited to participate in Part II of a series of two connected Language Dives (optional). This series of conversations provides students with practice using a sentence structure they encounter and use repeatedly throughout the module. In Part I in Unit 1, students practiced paraphrasing a sentence to describe the main idea of "Fight to Survive!" In Part II, they will use their paraphrases and the structure of the sentence to practice stating a focus for the informative text about their expert group animals. Preview the Language Dive Guide and consider how to invite conversation among students to address the questions and goals suggested under each sentence strip chunk (see supporting materials). Select from the questions and goals provided to best meet your students' needs. Create a "Language Chunk Wall"--an area in the classroom where students can display and categorize the academic phrases discussed in the Language Dive.
- Mini Language Dives. Highlight and discuss language structures that are critical to understanding the characteristics of focus on the Informative Writing Checklist. Examples: "I state my focus clearly and my writing stays focused throughout the piece." "I have an introduction that gives readers the important information they need / to understand the piece."
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- Invite students to highlight and label the focus statement in the model essay research text, and underline and label the detail sentences that describe. Ask students to identify samples of a focus statement and sentences that describe habitat, diet, or predators and discuss them in home language groups or heterogeneous English-speaking groups.
For heavier support:
- Remind ELLs about the steps in the writing process: plan, draft, revise, edit, publish.
- Give ELLs practice reading aloud the focus question from the Informational Writing Planning graphic organizer: "How does my expert group animal use its body and behaviors to help it survive?" Then allow these students to read the question aloud in Work Time B. Practicing with a partner and then reading aloud in front of the class can help build ELLs' confidence and credibility.
- For Work Time C, provide students with a cloze introduction paragraph about their animal. Write the paragraph for them (or use a former student's exemplar), but leave out key words and phrases for small groups to fill in together. Make the task simpler by writing a list of the key words next to the cloze paragraph so that students can select from the list.
- Reinforce the structure of an informative piece. Example: Write the parts of the informative piece on strips of paper. Scramble them and have students sequence them correctly:
- Introduction Paragraph
- Focus statement
- Detail sentence #1 that describes
- Detail sentence #2 that describes
- Detail sentence #3 that describes
- Proof Paragraph #1
- Topic statement
- Detail sentence #1 that describes
- etc.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation (MMR): In this lesson, support developing writers in advance to show them examples of effective introductions and ask: "How did the author design the introduction so it grabbed the reader's attention and gave important information?" Also discuss the following criteria for introductions: hooks a reader, provides context, and is appropriate to purpose and audience. Bridge the abstract to the concrete by discussing these criteria in light of the task for today's lesson. Brainstorm specific ideas for how to hook a reader, what the context will be for this writing, and what the purpose and audience are.
- Multiple Means of Action & Expression (MMAE): Practice finding and writing focus statements by providing students who may need additional support with writing the chance to meet in a small group to look at sample introductions. Ask students to highlight the focus statement in each introduction and discuss what the focus question may have been. Remind students that their focus statement will be answering the question "How do _____ use their bodies and behavior to help them survive?"
- Multiple Means of Engagement (MME): Provide support for students who may need additional guidance in peer interactions and collaboration. For example, offer prompts or sentence frames that support students in asking for help or clarification from classmates. To support students who may need additional support in sustaining effort and/or attention, provide opportunities for restating the goal. In doing so, students are able to maintain focus for completing the activity.
Vocabulary
Key: (L): Lesson-Specific Vocabulary; (T): Text-Specific Vocabulary; (W): Vocabulary used in writing
- introduction, focus statement (L)
Materials
- Model informational essay (from Lesson 7; one per student and one to display)
- Painted Essay(r) template (from Module 1; one per student and one to display)
- Painting an Essay Plan (from Module 1; for teacher reference)
- Informational Texts anchor chart (begun in Lesson 7; added to with students in Work Time A)
- Informational Texts anchor chart (example, for teacher reference)
- Equity sticks
- Language Dive Guide II: "Fight to Survive!" (optional; for ELLs; for teacher reference; see supporting materials)
- Language Dive Sentence Strip Chunks I: "Fight To Survive!" (optional; for ELLs; from Unit 1, Lesson 7; one to display)
- Language Dive Note-catcher I: "Fight To Survive!" Part 2 (optional; for ELLs; from Unit 1, Lesson 7; one per student and one to display)
- Informative Writing Checklist (from Lesson 7; one per student and one to display)
- Informational Writing Planning graphic organizer (from Lesson 7; one per student and one to display)
- Millipede Informational Writing Planning graphic organizer (from Lesson 7; one to display)
- Lined paper (several pieces per student)
- Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart (from Module 1)
- Expert Group Animal research notebook (distributed in Lesson 1; one per student)
- Sketch page (page 20)
Materials from Previous Lessons
New Materials
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
Opening | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Engaging the Writer and Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)
"What steps do writers go through when writing a text?" (Writers plan, draft, revise, edit, and publish their writing.)
"Where are we in the writing process for our informative pieces?" (We have researched and planned our pieces.)
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Work Time
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A. Examining a Model Introduction (15 minutes)
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B. Guided Practice: Writing a Focus Statement (10 minutes)
"Why should the writing be focused throughout the piece?" (It should be focused so the reader doesn't get confused while he or she is reading, or It should stay on the same topic.)
"How does my expert group animal use its body and behaviors to help it survive?"
"How does the millipede use its body and behaviors to help it survive?" (The millipede has many ways of protecting itself, or The millipede protects itself by rolling into a ball and using poison.)
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C. Drafting an Introduction Paragraph (25 minutes)
"What should we refer to while drafting our introductions?" (our planning graphic organizer, the introduction part of our graphic organizer, and the Academic and Domain-Specific Word Wall.)
"What habits helped you succeed in drafting your introduction paragraph? I'll give you time to think and discuss with a partner." (Responses will vary.)
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Closing & Assessments
Closing |
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A. Third Draft of Sketch (5 minutes)
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Homework
Homework | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. |
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