- I can revise my narrative writing to slow down time when something interesting relevant to the plot is happening. (W.5.3, W.5.4, W.5.5)
- I can identify interjections and prepositions, explain their function in writing, and use them in my writing. (L.5.1a)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- RL.5.4: Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative language such as metaphors and similes.
- W.5.3: Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences.
- W.5.3b: Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, description, and pacing, to develop experiences and events or show the responses of characters to situations.
- W.5.4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
- W.5.5: With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.
- L.5.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
- L.5.1a: Explain the function of conjunctions, prepositions, and interjections in general and their function in particular sentences
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- Revised partner narrative (W.5.3, W.5.4, W.5.5)
- Exit Ticket: Prepositions and Interjections (L.5.1a)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Analyzing a Model: Slowing Down Time, Part II (20 minutes) B. Partner Practice: Slowing Down Time, Part II (15 minutes) C. Mini Lesson: Prepositions (15 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Exit Ticket: Prepositions and Interjections (5 minutes) 4. Homework A. Complete at least one of the Prepositions and Interjections Practices (Prepositions and Interjections I) in your Unit 3 homework. B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt to respond to in the front of your independent reading journal. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas in which students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Prepare the Parts of Speech anchor chart.
- Post: Learning targets, Parts of Speech anchor chart, Narrative Texts anchor chart, Steps for Revising My Writing anchor chart, and Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart.
Tech and Multimedia
- Work Time A: Students use a collaborative digital copy of the "Bite at Night" text in a Google Doc, for example.
- Work Time B: If students used a word processor for their partner narrative, they revise their writing using the same tool. To show their revisions from this lesson, students should highlight in red.
- Closing and Assessment A: Exit tickets are completed online, on a Google Form, for example.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 5.I.A.1, 5.1.A.2, 5.I.A.3, 5.I.B.6, 5.I.B.7, 5.I.C.10a, 5.I.C.11, 5.I.C.12a, 5.II.A.5
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs with opportunities to analyze a model and through explicit instruction in preposition usage, an area that is often difficult for ELLs.
- ELLs may find prepositions challenging. The English preposition system is often erratic. The prepositions for time and place introduced in this lesson are more straightforward; even then, usage can be illogical, e.g., on Monday, in November. Help students acquire prepositions through volume of conversation and volume of reading. Explicitly point out entire prepositional phrases (not just the prepositions themselves) that are frequently used during classroom conversation or complex texts. Learning prepositions as part of a frequently used phrase (collocation) rather than in isolation will help students begin to use them properly. Reassure students that, upon repeated exposure to prepositional phrases, they will begin to use prepositions properly. Invite them to correct any errors in their usage and celebrate correct usage.
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- Invite students to highlight phrases with prepositions in the texts they are using and writing and begin keeping a prepositions glossary. In the glossary, students can explain the meaning and function of each preposition in the context of the sentence in which it is used.
For heavier support:
- Prepare big moment sentence strips and dialogue phrase/clause strips for use in Work Time A.
- Practice prepositions in, on, at, for, toward, through. In preparation for the next lesson and end of unit assessment, invite students to find examples of the prepositions introduced in this lesson that are also used in the Unit 3 documents: in, on, and at are the most frequently used in The Most Beautiful Roof in the World, "Bite at Night," the mid-unit assessment, the Narrative Writing Checklist, and the Tracking Progress Narrative Writing self-assessment. (Under is used in this sense only once; behind not at all.) Also ask them to add toward, for, and through to their list of prepositions used in Unit 3 documents. Students learned for as a conjunction, but explain that for is also a preposition.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation: When teaching students about prepositions, consider varied ways to represent the function of the preposition. In addition to text, have students use an object to demonstrate its relationship to another object, such as beside, on, behind, etc. For prepositional phrases related to time, use calendars or clocks to represent the prepositional phrase (e.g., "On Monday ..."; "At 9 o'clock ..."). These multiple representations can help make the function of the preposition more concrete to students. Consider allowing these tools to be available as students work on the exit ticket in the Closing and Assessment.
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression: In this lesson, students are asked to identify places in their writing that need to be "slowed down" and to add dialogue with appropriate punctuation. Consider varying the complexity by breaking this task down into three discrete parts. Have students identify areas that need to be "slowed down" with a highlighter or underlining. Then tell students that they can write the dialogue first and then go back to add the appropriate punctuation as necessary. Support their executive function skills by offering a checklist or rubric that outlines these steps.
- Multiple Means of Engagement: For students to be successful adding dialogue into their own narratives, they will need authentic models. In this lesson, they use "Bite at Night" as the model text. Facilitate comprehension by allowing students to act out the dialogue from the text or asking students to match premade dialogue examples (e.g., on sentence strips, on a matching worksheet, etc.) to "big moments" in the text. Increased engagement with the model text will help students understand the learning target for their own writing.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
- relevant, slow down time, pacing, interjections, prepositions (L)
Materials
- "Bite at Night" (from Lesson 1; one per student and one to display)
- Parts of Speech anchor chart (begun in Module 1; added to in advance; see supporting materials)
- Narrative Texts anchor chart (begun in Lesson 2; added to during Work Time A; see supporting materials)
- Narrative Writing Checklist (from Lesson 2; one per student and one to display)
- Narrative Writing Checklist (from Lesson 2; for teacher reference)
- Writing Dialogue handout (one per student and one to display)
- Steps for Revising My Writing anchor chart (one to display)
- Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- Red colored pencils (one per student)
- Partner narrative drafts (begun in Lesson 2; revised in Work Time B; one per student)
- Prepositions (one per student and one to display)
- Exit Ticket: Prepositions and Interjections (one per student and one to display)
- Exit Ticket: Prepositions and Interjections (answers, for teacher reference)
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
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A. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)
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Work Time
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A. Analyzing a Model: Slowing Down Time, Part II (20 minutes)
"When and why does an author slow down time in a narrative?" (when something interesting/exciting relevant to the plot is happening; to build anticipation and to engage readers in the action so that they feel as though they are there and want to keep reading)
"How else does the author slow down time? Look at the areas you underlined in green. Are there any features that you notice?" (dialogue)
"What does this reveal to you about the narrator's response to the situation?" (It tells us that hearing noises at night is normal and that she reminded herself of this to calm down.)
"What does the dialogue tell you that you wouldn't know if the dialogue wasn't there?" (that she isn't afraid of the noise because it happens a lot)
"What does this reveal to you about the narrator's response to the situation?" (It tells us that she didn't know what had bitten her.)
"What does the dialogue tell you that you wouldn't know if the dialogue wasn't there?" (that she didn't know what had caused the pain)
"What other interjections can you find in this narrative?" (Yikes!) "What other interjections can you think of that a character might say to express sudden surprise, disgust, joy, etc.?" (Responses will vary, but may include: Wow! Yippee! Hooray! Yuck! Yum!) "What interjections can you think of in our home languages?" (Aiya! in Mandarin; bit'aan in Arabic) Call on volunteers to share the interjection and its English translation. Ask other students to choose one interjection from a different language to quietly repeat. Invite students to say their chosen interjection out loud when you give the signal. Chorally repeat the interjections.
"Are there any specific criteria based on your analysis of 'Bite at Night' that you should be aware of and list in that column on the checklist?"
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"Why do we want readers to infer meaning from the dialogue? Why don't we tell readers directly?" (It can be more interesting; it can be more authentic.) |
B. Partner Practice: Slowing Down Time, Part II (15 minutes)
"How do you know where the dialogue is in this narrative?" (Quotation marks are the easiest way to spot dialogue, but students may also suggest looking for phrases such as "I/he/she said.") "How do you punctuate dialogue?" (see below)
"Where are the big moments?" "What new information does your dialogue add that the reader wouldn't know without it?"
"How does our discussion and practice with speeding up and slowing down time over the past few lessons add to your understanding of how to write a good narrative? I'll give you time to think and discuss with a partner." (Responses will vary.)
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C. Mini Lesson: Prepositions (15 minutes)
"What is a preposition?" (Responses will vary, but may include: a word that comes before a noun or a pronoun to introduce information about where, when, how, or what kind; students formed and used prepositional phrases in grade 4.) "What does pre- mean?" (before) "What does -position mean?" (where something is located) "What do the two mean together?" (positioned or located before)
"What do prepositions come before?" "What is the function of a preposition?"
"What do prepositions come before?" (usually before nouns or pronouns) "What is the function of a preposition?" (to introduce information about where, when, how, or what kind)
"Can you give an example?" (Responses will vary.)
"What are some examples of prepositions? What are the examples in the sentences?" (on, above, over, by, for) "Can you think of any others?" (Responses will vary.)
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"What is the translation of 'in the morning' in our home languages?" (dans la matinee in French) Invite students to use their translation dictionary if necessary. Call on volunteers to share. Ask other students to choose one translation to quietly repeat. Invite students to say their chosen translation out loud when you give the signal. Chorally repeat the translations and the word in English. Invite self- and peer correction of the pronunciation of the translations and the English. Repeat with the other prepositional phrases introduced in Work Time C. |
Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Exit Ticket: Prepositions and Interjections (5 minutes)
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Homework
Homework | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Complete at least one of the Prepositions and Interjections Practices (Prepositions and Interjections I) in your Unit 3 homework. B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt to respond to in the front of your independent reading journal. |
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