- I can critique my partner's essay and provide kind, helpful, and specific feedback. (W.5.2, W.5.5)
- I can revise my literary essay based on peer feedback. (W.5.2c, W.5.2d, W.5.5, W.5.6, W.5.10, L.5.2d, L.5.6)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- W.5.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
- W.5.2c: Link ideas within and across categories of information using words, phrases, and clauses (e.g., in contrast, especially).
- W.5.2d: Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.
- W.5.5: With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.
- W.5.6: With some guidance and support from adults, use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing as well as to interact and collaborate with others; demonstrate sufficient command of keyboarding skills to type a minimum of two pages in a single sitting.
- W.5.10: Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.
- L.5.2: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing.
- L.5.2d: Use underlining, quotation marks, or italics to indicate titles of works.
- L.5.6: Acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate general academic and domain-specific words and phrases, including those that signal contrast, addition, and other logical relationships (e.g., however, although, nevertheless, similarly, moreover, in addition).
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- End of Unit 2 Assessment: Revising a Literary Essay (W.5.2c, W.5.2d, W.5.5, W.5.6, W.5.10, L.5.2d, L.5.6)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Returning Mid-Unit 2 Assessment (5 minutes) B. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Mini Lesson: Linking Words and Phrases (20 minutes) B. Peer Critique: Linking Words and Phrases (15 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. End of Unit 2 Assessment: Revising a Literary Essay (15 minutes) 4. Homework A. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas in which students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Strategically pair students with a new partner for the peer critique in Work Time B.
- Prepare:
- Feedback on students' Mid-Unit 2 Assessments in preparation for returning them in Opening A.
- End of Unit 2 Assessment (see Assessment Overview and Resources).
- Technology necessary for students to type their final essay.
- Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart. Record the new habits of character (initiative and responsibility) and what they mean, but leave the final two columns blank to fill in with the whole group (see supporting materials).
- Review the Peer Critique and Thumb-O-Meter protocols. See Classroom Protocols.
- Post: Learning targets and applicable anchor charts.
Tech and Multimedia
- Work Time A: For students who will benefit from hearing the text read aloud multiple times, consider using a text to speech tool such as Natural Reader, SpeakIt! for Google Chrome or the Safari reader. Note that to use a web based text to speech to tool such as SpeakIt! or Safari reader, you will need to create an online doc--for example, a Google Doc, containing the text.
- Work Time B: Students provide peer feedback using the comments feature on a word-processing document--for example, a Google Doc.
- Closing and Assessment A: Students revise their literary essays on a word-processing document--for example, a Google Doc. Prepare the technology for students to do this, one device per student.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 5.I.A.1, 5.I.A.2, 5.I.A.3, 5.I.A.4, 5.I.B.6, 5.I.B.7, 5.I.B.8, 5.I.C.10, 5.I.C.11, 5.I.C.12, and 5.II.C.6
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs with opportunities to bring their content and language knowledge full circle as they receive feedback on the literary essay they've worked on in this unit. In addition, the lesson makes linking language and its purpose explicit. Understanding how linking language works is a key entry point into complex texts and the English language system.
- ELLs may find it challenging to immediately apply what they learn about linking language in the mini lesson in this lesson to their own literary essay during the assessment portion of this lesson. Students are given 26 linking words and phrases in this lesson. ELLs may not have learned or may not remember the meaning of most of them. Consider highlighting one or two examples of effective use of linking words and one or two examples for improvement in ELL texts in advance. Before students begin, encourage them to do their best and congratulate them on the progress they've made with learning English.
- As you give feedback on the narratives written in the Mid-Unit 2 Assessment, you may notice that some ELLs' writing contains many language errors. Focus on only one or two pervasive errors to avoid overwhelming yourself and the student. For example, ask students to clearly state the main idea of their paragraph. Go further by asking them how to use a subject with a predicate to clarify their description of a character's response for Question 2 or their statement of theme for Question 6. Leave other sentence- and word-level errors for last (e.g., capitalization, syntax, spelling) unless they interfere with the meaning of the main idea.
In addition, spend an equal amount of time giving feedback on what the student did well. Get excited about and discuss the student's ability to complete the graphic organizer, include a reasonable quote for evidence, or use comparison language, for example. This will help enable students identify and repeat their success next time.
- To use linking words effectively, ELLs need to begin to understand the English clause system. This concept may be new and possibly overwhelming for them. Unlike English, not all languages require a subject and a predicate to form an independent clause. However, nearly all languages use coordinating conjunctions to connect clauses. Use these facts as a departure point for talking with ELLs about English clauses. In general, students need to know that linking words can connect two independent clauses, an independent and a dependent clause, or two or more phrases or words. Temporal linking language can be used to introduce an independent clause. Remind students about their work in Unit 1 on subject-predicates and writing complete sentences. Remind them of their work with the linking word while in the Unit 2, Lesson 12 Language Dive. Be explicit about these grammar terms (or use equivalent terms, such as complete thought for independent clause and incomplete thought for dependent clause). Reassure students and encourage them to do their best, emphasizing that learning these terms and concepts will help them write clearly over time.
- Consider lightening the load for ELLs by highlighting the most frequently used linking language in the model literary essay and comparison linking language that may be most useful in student texts (e.g., and, in contrast, but, while). Consider providing time for ELLs to use their online or paper translation dictionary to translate the words.
- Create sentence strips to visually represent the differences between the first two sentences in the model literary essay. Write the sentences in blue marker on sentence strips. On smaller strips or on index cards, write the linking words and phrases in red marker. Display the sentences on a pocket chart and invite students to add the linking words and phrases to the original sentences while discussing how each linking word affects the meaning. This will provide students with a tactile experience to help them understand meaning and syntax.
- Make sure that ELLs understand the assessment directions. Answer their questions, refraining from supplying answers to the assessment questions themselves. See additional support in the lesson.
- After the assessment, ask students to discuss what was easiest and what was most difficult on the assessment, and why. To facilitate this discussion, prepare a concise rubric of the elements of the assessment, and allow students to rank the difficulty level of these elements on a Likert scale. Example:
- The linking language was easy to revise. 1 2 3 4 5
- In future lessons and for homework, focus on the language skills that will help students address these assessment challenges.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiples Means of Representation (MMR): In this lesson, students provide feedback on a peer's literary essay. Some students may need additional modeling on how to give peer feedback. Consider preparing sample paragraphs for a literary essay with some common errors. Model how to identify those errors with a partner (either a student or co-teacher).
- Multiples Means of Action and Expression (MMAE): Because this is an assessment, students need to revise their essays independently. Help minimize barriers to writing by providing students with supports for fine motor skills (e.g., slanted desk, pencil grip, or word processor). Also, reduce distractions with dividers or sound-canceling headphones.
- Multiples Means of Engagement (MME): Create a supportive and inclusive classroom environment by reminding students that everyone is working toward being a better writer. Highlight and praise growth and development rather than relative performance.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
- responsibility, initiative (L)
Materials
- Mid-Unit 2 Assessments with feedback (from Lesson 10; one per student; returned with feedback during Opening A)
- End of Unit 2 Assessment: Revising a Literary Essay (one per student and one to display; see Assessment Overview and Resources)
- Model Literary Essay: Draft (one per student and one to display)
- Model literary essay (from Lesson 12; one to display; added to during Work Time A; see supporting materials)
- Linking Words and Phrases (one per student and one to display)
- Model literary essay (example, for teacher reference)
- Working to Become and Effective Learners anchor chart (begun in Lesson 13; added to during Work Time A; see supporting materials)
- Working to Become and Effective Learners anchor chart (example, for teacher reference)
- Informative Writing Checklist (from Lesson 13; one per student)
- Informative Writing Checklist (example, for teacher reference)
- Writing Complete Sentences handout (from Lesson 13; one per student and one to display)
- Directions for Peer Critique (from Lesson 8; one to display)
- Peer Critique anchor chart (begun in Lesson 8)
- Sticky notes (one per student)
- Orange and purple pen or pencil (one of each per student)
- Working to Become Ethical People anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 2)
- Device (one per student; for students to type their final drafts during the Closing)
Materials from Previous Lessons
New Materials
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
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A. Returning Mid-Unit 2 Assessment (5 minutes)
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B. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)
"I can critique my partner's essay and provide kind, helpful, and specific feedback." "I can revise my literary essay based on peer feedback."
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"Can you put the learning target in your own words?" (I can help my classmate edit their essay.) "How do you feel about that target?" (I am excited to improve my literary essay.) |
Work Time
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A. Mini Lesson: Linking Words and Phrases (20 minutes)
"What did you notice?" (Responses will vary, but may include: It was very choppy and jumpy rather than smooth.)
"What differences do you notice between the two versions of text?" (There are linking words and phrases in the final model.) "What do you notice about the flow of the writing in the final draft compared to the first draft?" (The first draft is a lot of short sentences that sound choppy when read aloud. It doesn't flow very well.)
"How did the author make the writing flow better in the final version?" (with linking words to improve the transitions between facts)
"What do these specific linking words/phrases do?" (They help the reader see the contrast between the character reactions; they show that the two reactions were different: For example, while Esperanza does one thing, Miguel does another.)
"What do you notice about the title of the book, Esperanza Rising, on the draft compared to the final essay?" (italicized on the final essay)
"Why has the author included this? The text is already mentioned in the essay--isn't that enough?" (so that the reader knows which version of the text the author used, in case he or she wants to read it or to reference something discussed in the essay)
"Using the anchor chart as a guide, what does initiative mean?" (I see what needs to be done and make sure it gets done.) "Using the anchor chart as a guide, what does responsibility mean?" (I take ownership.)
"What does it look like to show responsibility? If you were watching a group working together, what would you see?" (Responses will vary, but may include: self-assessing, setting goals.) "What does it sound like to show responsibility? If you were watching a group working together, what would you hear?" (Responses will vary, but may include: "I think I did this well, and here is evidence of that ..."; "I think I could improve ... by ..."; "I decided to make this change because ...") "What does it look like to show initiative? If you were watching a group working together, what would you see?" (Responses will vary, but may include: When the group members aren't talking to one another or working well together, one person steps forward to make a decision to help move the group forward, or someone becomes a facilitator and allocates roles, or does things without being asked.) "What does it sound like to show initiative? If you were watching a group working together, what would you hear?" (Responses will vary, but may include: "How about we try this?"; "I have an idea. Perhaps we could ...")
"How are those two habits of character going to be useful in this assessment?" (We need to see what must be done and take initiative on making revisions to our work without teacher guidance, and we need to take ownership of our own work so that if we don't agree with some of the peer feedback we receive, it is our responsibility to choose not to follow it.)
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"Why are linking words and phrases important?" (to make writing clearer, help the reader go easily from one idea to the next, and explain how one idea makes sense with the next idea)
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B. Peer Critique: Linking Words and Phrases (15 minutes)
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Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. End of Unit 2 Assessment: Revising a Literary Essay (15 minutes)
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Homework
Homework | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. |
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