- I can listen as my peers share their informational writing and give specific praise for their work. (W.4.4, L.4.3c)
- I can synthesize information to develop an accurate character profile supported by research. (RI.4.9, W.4.3a, W.4.3d, W.4.5, L.4.3a, L.4.6)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- RI.4.9: Integrate information from two texts on the same topic in order to write or speak about the subject knowledgeably.
- W.4.3: Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences.
- W.4.3a: Orient the reader by establishing a situation and introducing a narrator and/or characters; organize an event sequence that unfolds naturally.
- W.4.3d: Use concrete words and phrases and sensory details to convey experiences and events precisely.
- W.4.4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
- W.4.5: With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing.
- SL.4.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 4 topics and texts, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.
- SL.4.1b: Follow agreed-upon rules for discussions and carry out assigned roles.
- L.4.3: Use knowledge of language and its conventions when writing, speaking, reading, or listening.
- L.4.3a: Choose words and phrases to convey ideas precisely.
- L.4.3c: Differentiate between contexts that call for formal English (e.g., presenting ideas) and situations where informal discourse is appropriate (e.g., small-group discussion).
- L.4.6: Acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate general academic and domain-specific words and phrases, including those that signal precise actions, emotions, or states of being (e.g., quizzed, whined, stammered) and that are basic to a particular topic (e.g., wildlife, conservation, and endangered when discussing animal preservation).
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- Informative page (W.4.4, L.4.3c)
- Character Profile graphic organizer (RI.4.9, W.4.3a, W.4.3d, W.4.5, L.4.3a, L.4.6)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Engaging the Writer: Sharing (10 minutes) B. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Developing a Character Profile for the Millipede (10 minutes) B. Partner Practice: Developing a Character Profile for the Millipede (5 minutes) C. Independent Practice: Developing a Character Profile for the Expert Group Animal (20 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Sharing (10 minutes) 4. Homework A. Reread "Powerful Polly" for the gist. B. Choose and respond to a narrative QuickWrite prompt from your homework resources for this unit. C. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt to respond to in the front of your independent reading journal. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas where students may need additional support:
Assessment Guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Review, prepare, and display the Author's Chair Celebration anchor chart.
- Create groups of three to four students for sharing in the Author's Chair Celebration. Be sure that group members represent different expert group animals.
- Display the Choose-Your-Own-Adventure Narrative anchor chart.
- Display the Narrative Writing Checklist.
- Collect Unit 1 and Unit 2 research materials for modeling.
- Post: Learning targets.
Tech and Multimedia
- Opening A: Record students' presentations of their informational pieces using audioBoom or similar software to compile an audiobook of their presentations.
- Work Time C: Allow students to use an online graphic organizer such as Creately or ReadWriteThink's Webbing Tool to brainstorm, record, or share initial ideas about their characters.
- Work Time C: Students complete their graphic organizer in a word processing document, for example a Google Doc using Speech to Text facilities activated on devices, or using an app or software like Dictation.io.
- Closing and Assessment A: digital exit tickets: Students fill out a Google Form or record thinking on a class Google Doc or Google Spreadsheet.
- Closing and Assessment A: audio exit tickets: Students record their ideas in audio through free software or apps such as Audacity or GarageBand.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 4.I.A.1, 4.I.A.2, 4.I.A.3, 4.I.A.4, 4.I.B.5, 4.I.B.6, 4.I.B.8, 4.I.C.10, 4.I.C.11, 4.I.C.12, 4.II.B.5
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs by giving them a lot of freedom to use their imagination to create characters. It's a rich opportunity for them to share and celebrate unique home culture. For example, tigers are often foolish and funny in Korean folklore, so students with a Korean background might choose to imbue their characters with these qualities.
- ELLs may find it challenging to figure out when they should rely on their research (e.g., describing where their main character lives) and when they should maximize their imaginations as they introduce their main character. Discuss each of the sections on the Character Profile graphic organizer as to whether they are more research-oriented or more imagination-oriented. If students struggle to anthropomorphize an animal, read them a few samples from popular books whose animal characters have human traits. Examples: Watership Down by Richard Adams and Into the Wild by Erin Hunter.
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- For Work Time A, invite students to create a bank of possible precise words or phrases that ELLs who need heavier support can choose from to describe how their character would react to different situations and what his daily life is like.
For heavier support:
- Provide ELLs with cloze paragraphs they can fill in with new terms from today's lesson. You can write your own or search the internet for authentic samples in context. Example: "_____ is usually found between quotation marks. It's the actual spoken conversations between the _____. For the _____, you can use a real city, but you need to look at maps." (Dialogue/characters/setting)
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation (MMR): In this lesson, students are introduced to learning targets that may contain unfamiliar vocabulary terms. As you introduce each learning target, consider writing synonyms or sketching a visual above each key term to scaffold students' understanding. Additionally, invite students to share ways in which they worked toward similar targets from previous lessons.
- Multiple Means of Action & Expression (MMAE): Support students who need additional writing help by meeting with them in advance to go over the bullet points on the Choose-Your-Own-Adventure Narrative anchor chart. They will benefit from discussing what will be expected of them in an environment that is more individualized and allows them to ask more questions. Carefully consider how much of the task to reveal to these struggling writers during each lesson. Allowing them to focus on smaller chunks of the task may help them do their best writing.
- Multiple Means of Engagement (MME): Invite students to reflect on their learning from Units 1 and 2. This supports students in understanding the value and relevance of the activities in this lesson. Provide support for students who may need additional guidance in peer interactions and collaboration. For example, offer prompts or sentence frames that support students in asking for help or clarification from classmates. To support students who may need additional support in sustaining effort and/or attention, provide opportunities for restating the goal. In doing so, students are able to maintain focus for completing the activity.
Vocabulary
Key: (L): Lesson-Specific Vocabulary; (T): Text-Specific Vocabulary; (W): Vocabulary used in writing
- information, facts, details, character profile, physical description, personality traits, daily life, behavior, family, habitat description (L)
Materials
- Editing for Capitalization, Punctuation and Spelling I (answers, for teacher reference)
- Author's Chair Celebration anchor chart (new; teacher-created)
- Sticky notes (three or four per student)
- Narrative Writing Checklist (one per student and one to display)
- Choose-Your-Own-Adventure Narrative anchor chart (from Lesson 1)
- Animal Defenses research notebook (from Unit 1; one per student and one to display)
- Expert Group Animal research notebook (from Unit 2; one per student and one to display)
- Character Profile graphic organizer (one per student and one to display)
- Millipede Character Profile graphic organizer (completed, for teacher reference)
- Research texts (from Units 1 and 2; one per student and one to display)
- Animal Behavior: Animal Defenses (book; from Unit 1, Lesson 2; pages 10-11, 22-26, 38, 49-52, and 55-58; one per student)
- "Fight to Survive!" (from Unit 2, Lesson 2; one per student)
- Expert Group Animal web page (from Unit 2, Lesson 3; one per student)
- Vocabulary log (one per student; begun in Module 1)
- Index cards (one per student)
- "Powerful Polly" pufferfish narrative (one per student)
Materials from Previous Lessons
New Materials
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
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A. Engaging the Writer: Sharing (10 minutes)
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For heavier support:
For lighter support:
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B. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)
"What do we mean by the phrase from what I have read in the criterion?" (The narrative has to have information from research in it.) "What do we mean by information?" (scientifically accurate facts and details from research)
"Knowing we have to use information from our research to create the characters, setting, or events in the story to write an effective narrative, what does this mean for our Choose-Your-Own-Adventure narratives?" (We need to use details from our research to describe ways our expert group animals defend themselves.)
"Can you give an example?" (Responses will vary.)
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Work Time
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A. Developing a Character Profile for the Millipede (10 minutes)
"Who is the audience of the narrative part of your animal defense mechanisms book?" (Other students, teachers, and parents will read our writing.)
"What is the purpose of the narrative?" (to entertain the reader)
"Knowing the task, purpose, and audience for our narratives, should the narrative sound formal or informal?" (It should sound more informal because it is a story.)
"Are there any sections of your research notes that have precise words and phrases that you can refer to when planning and writing your narratives?" (vocabulary log, the Movement Words note-catcher in research notebooks, and the Domain-Specific Word Wall)
"How would she/he have reacted to different situations in his/her world? What words or phrases can I use to describe this precisely?" "How would he/she have reacted to noticing a predator is approaching? What words or phrases can I use to describe this precisely?" "Would he/she have been brave, scared, or nervous? What words or phrases can I use to describe this precisely?"
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"Polly watched as a sea anemone gently moved in the current." The writer wants to replace the underlined word to make her meaning clearer. Which would be a better choice for the underlined word? Explain why. A. dived Provide ELLs with the language to explain why a, c, and d are vague or incorrect and why waved is better. Examples:
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B. Partner Practice: Developing a Character Profile for the Millipede (5 minutes)
"What could we add to these final boxes?"
"Can you say more about that?" (Responses will vary.) "Who can tell us what your classmate said in your own words?" (Responses will vary.)
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C. Independent Practice: Developing a Character Profile for the Expert Group Animal (20 minutes)
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Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Sharing (10 minutes)
"What do you think is most interesting about your partner's character? Why?"
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Homework
Homework | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Reread "Powerful Polly" for the gist. B. Choose and respond to a narrative QuickWrite prompt from your homework resources for this unit. C. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt to respond to in the front of your independent reading journal. |
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