- I can clearly and confidently present my poem and explain what inspired me to write it. (SL.4.4, SL.4.5)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- SL.4.4: Report on a topic or text, tell a story, or recount an experience in an organized manner, using appropriate facts and relevant, descriptive details to support main ideas or themes; speak clearly at an understandable pace.
- SL.4.5: Add audio recordings and visual displays to presentations when appropriate to enhance the development of main ideas or themes.
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- Peer Critique form (SL.4.4, SL.4.5)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Returning Mid-Unit 3 Assessment (5 minutes) B. Reviewing Learning Target (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Practicing Poetry Presentations, Part I (20 minutes) B. Peer Critique: Poetry Presentations (20 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Practicing Poetry Presentations, Part II (10 minutes) 4. Homework A. Practice your poetry presentation for the next lesson. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your inde-pendent reading journal. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas in which students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Provide feedback on students' Mid-Unit 3 Assessments in preparation for returning them in Opening A.
- Practice presenting the model poetry presentation with images to students in preparation to do it as a model in Work Time A of the lesson (see supporting materials). Another option is to record another adult presenting the same presentation and to play students the video. In this situation, ensure the presenter follows the guidelines on the Effective Presentations anchor chart (example, for teacher reference) in the supporting materials.
- Prepare the technology students will use to show visuals as they present (see Technology and Multimedia).
- Strategically group students in triads for the Peer Critique in Work Time B.
- Review the Thumb-O-Meter protocol. See Classroom Protocols.
- Post: Learning targets, Performance Task anchor chart, Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart, and Working to Become Ethical People anchor chart.
Tech and Multimedia
- Work Time A: Prepare technology for students to show visuals during their presentations--for example, a projector, or an interactive whiteboard. If you have only one available, model for the group how to use it, and be prepared to be on hand to support students with the technology in the actual presentation. Students could also show enlarged copies of images or distribute copies of their images for audience reference. Choose the level of technology that is appropriate for your situation and guide students accordingly. If students are using technology for their presentations, ensure that hard copies of images have been scanned before this lesson.
- Work Time B: Video record students presenting and providing one another with feedback to watch with students to evaluate strengths and areas for improvement. Post it on a teacher webpage or on a portfolio app such as Seesaw for students to watch at home with families. Most devices (cell phones, tablets, laptop computers) come equipped with free video and audio recording apps or software.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 4.I.C.9, 4.I.C.11, 4.I.C.12, 4.II.A.1, 4.II.A.2, and 4.II.C.6
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs with opportunities to discuss good presentation technique; practice presenting; present, receive, and give presentation feedback; then practice presenting again. This cycle can help build students' confidence and skills.
- ELLs may find it challenging to present in class. In addition to any personal aversion to public speaking, they may find the concept unusual, and they may be self-conscious about their language use. See the Meeting Students' Needs column for supports.
- As you provide feedback on the Mid-Unit 3 Assessment, you may notice that ELLs' responses contain many language errors. Focus only on one or two pervasive errors to avoid overwhelming yourself and the student. For example, address overall issues that interfere with meaning: (1) understanding the assessment directions, (2) the poetry revision concepts (word choice, punctuation), and (3) sentence-level issues (language issues such as word choice, syntax, or subject-predicate structure). Leave minor errors for last (e.g., spelling) unless they interfere with the gist of the student's response.
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- Consider inviting students to create an outline or index card notes of key phrases in their presentation and then to deliver the presentation without reading line by line.
- Invite students to monitor and correct their own errors during practice and after the presentation, using strategies such as asking themselves: "Is what I'm saying making sense? If not, can I rephrase something to be clearer?" Presenters can "read" the audience for facial expressions that convey understanding or confusion, and back up to repeat or rephrase what they have just said. Presenters can also pinpoint a grammatical structure that they have struggled with in the past and how they have corrected their usage. Then, during the presentation, presenters can listen to whether or not they use the structure correctly and make any necessary corrections.
For heavier support:
- Show videos of former students presenting, inviting students to recognize strengths and areas for improvement. Videotape the students practicing their presentations, then allow the students to watch their presentations, self-assess, and try again.
- Consider standing with the student as he or she delivers the presentation, offering moral support but also cueing if the student falters.
- Help the student highlight specific words for stress and mark rising or falling intonation in places that are particularly challenging or important in communicating meaning.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation (MMR): Some students may need additional support with nonverbal presentation skills. They may require explicit instruction through multiple mediums. Consider providing a video of a poetry presentation and then discuss and list the moves that the poet uses to convey the message of the poem. Consider adding these to the Effective Presentations anchor chart so students can reference them as they prepare their presentation.
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression (MMAE): During the triad peer critique, some students may need additional support engaging with their partners in positive and respectful ways. Provide tools to help them overcome barriers to expressive communication (e.g., sentence strips with respectful feedback examples). Consider how to help students facilitate group organization with phrases such as "Would you like to share first?" etc. in order to organize their group.
- Multiple Means of Engagement (MME): During the Closing and Assessment, students practice their presentation for a second time, after receiving peer feedback. Some students may feel anxious about or distracted by practicing in a full classroom. Consider space when thinking about how to minimize risk for students. If possible, offer choice to some students about where they can practice (e.g., the hallway, the resource room, or an empty classroom).
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
- visuals (L)
Materials
- Mid-Unit 3 Assessments (from Lesson 3; one per student; returned with feedback during Opening A)
- Performance Task anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 1)
- Model presentation with images (from Lessons 8 and 9; one per student)
- Equity sticks (class set; one per student)
- Effective Presentations anchor chart (new; co-created with students during Work Time A)
- Effective Presentations anchor chart (example, for teacher reference)
- Poetry presentations (begun in Lesson 4; one per student)
- Visuals (images, videos, objects brought from home; from Lessons 8 and 9)
- Copied/printed images (optional; see Technology and Multimedia)
- Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 2)
- Peer Critique anchor chart (begun in Lesson 7)
- Peer Critique forms (two per student and one to display)
- Working to Become Ethical People anchor chart (begun in Unit 2, Lesson 1)
Materials from Previous Lessons
New Materials
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
Opening | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Returning Mid-Unit 3 Assessment (5 minutes)
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B. Reviewing Learning Target (5 minutes)
"I can clearly and confidently present my poem and explain what inspired me to write it."
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"I wonder why there is an -ly suffix on the end of both clearly and confidently. What if we remove the -ly?" Tell students you will give them time to think and discuss with their partner. (-ly signals an adverb, in this case. Both adverbs describe the verb present.) |
Work Time
Work Time | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Practicing Poetry Presentations, Part I (20 minutes)
Circulate to support students and to identify a student willing to model for the group before the peer critique in Work Time B. |
"Can you figure out why it is valuable to give presentations in class?" Tell students you will give them time to think and discuss with their partner. This will also help make the presentation more relevant to students and increase engagement. (Responses will vary, but may include: to share information, to gain confidence, to practice speaking English, to learn from and enjoy others' ideas, to gain autonomy.) (MME)
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B. Peer Critique: Poetry Presentations (20 minutes)
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Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Practicing Poetry Presentations, Part II (10 minutes)
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Homework
Homework | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Practice your poetry presentation for the next lesson. B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. |
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