- I can write a poem inspired by something meaningful to me. (W.4.4, W.4.5)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- RL.4.5: Explain major differences between poems, drama, and prose, and refer to the structural elements of poems (e.g., verse, rhythm, meter) and drama (e.g., casts of characters, settings, descriptions, dialogue, stage directions) when writing or speaking about a text.
- W.4.4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
- W.4.5: With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing.
- L.4.3: Use knowledge of language and its conventions when writing, speaking, reading, or listening.
- L.4.3c: Differentiate between contexts that call for formal English (e.g., presenting ideas) and situations where informal discourse is appropriate (e.g., small-group discussion).
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- Writing a Poem: Planning graphic organizer (W.4.5)
- Poem (W.4.4)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Reviewing Learning Target (10 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Selecting a Topic: Part I (10 minutes) B. Selecting a Topic: Part II (15 minutes) C. Writing Poetry (20 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Partner Share (5 minutes) 4. Homework A. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
Student: "She said _____."
Student: "He was saying that _____."
How it builds on previous work:
Areas in which students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Prepare photographs to inspire poetry, by creating three sets of the photographs (see supporting materials).
- Review the Thumb-O-Meter protocol. See Classroom Protocols.
- Post: Learning targets, Performance Task.
Tech and Multimedia
- Opening A: Consider sharing examples of student poetry from EL Education's Models of Excellence website:
- "The Lonely Chair | Models of Excellence". EL Education. Web. Accessed on 13 March, 2017.
- "I Am Poem | Models of Excellence". EL Education. Web. Accessed on 13 March, 2017.
- Work Time A and B: Students complete their Writing a Poem: Planning graphic organizer using word-processing software--for example, a Google Doc.
- Work Time C: Students write their poems using word processing software--for example, a Google Doc.
- Work Time C: Students use Speech to Text facilities activated on devices, or using an app or software such as Dictation.io.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 4.I.A.1, 4.I.A.2, 4.I.A.3, 4.I.A.4, 4.I.B.5, 4.I.B.6, 4.I.C.10, 4.I.C.11, 4.I.C.12, 4.II.A.1, and 4.II.B.5
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs with opportunities to write poetry freely, virtually ignoring the frequently confusing and extensive rules of formal writing. Encourage students to enjoy the free expression while continuously pointing out how formal writing is different. Students also listen to an illustrated read-aloud that brings up themes that are familiar to all cultures, such as human interdependence and the value of art.
- ELLs may find putting pen to paper challenging, even after brainstorming. See specific supports below and in the Meeting Students' Needs column.
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- Invite students to contrast the fragments or run-ons in their poem drafts with versions written in complete sentences. They can point out the differences and explain how the meaning or feeling changes when they use complete sentences.
- Encourage students to add on to the nouns and verbs in their poems with adjective, adverb, and prepositional phrases that increase variety and richness. Have them consider whether they'd like to strategically sprinkle their poems with words or phrases from their home language.
For heavier support:
- Allow ample time for students to use their home language to plan their poetry writing. Planning poetry can be cognitively and linguistically demanding. To ease the linguistic demands, invite students to first write and brainstorm in home language groups. Students who do not have a home language in common can be given additional time to think or write in their home language. Given the initial time to reflect and discuss in their home language, students can then discuss and write in English.
- For ELLs: Model and think aloud using the Writing a Poem: Planning graphic organizer. Then invite students to add more information to the model for more practice before independent work. Help them identify key elements of their graphic organizer and allow them to repeat words and phrases. For example, if a student wrote "car, far" or drew a car and a long road in the Topics 1 Ideas column, point to it and say an appropriate line, e.g., "I'll get in my car and drive so very far." Invite the student to confirm this is his or her intended meaning and repeat or rephrase the line.
- During the read-aloud, support beginning proficiency students by pointing at the pictures that demonstrate the meaning of the sentences. Dictate sentences for them to recite so that they practice using verbal language. Encourage them to act out key sections.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation (MMR): This lesson asks students to apply their knowledge in order to create a poem. Provide as many explicit examples as possible. Consider thinking aloud to brainstorm potential topics and then refine those topics. Before students draft their poems, provide multiple examples of different types of poetry (e.g. free verse, rhyming, acrostic, haiku, etc.) so students can use them as a model when constructing their own poems.
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression (MMAE): Students brainstorm potential topics that are meaningful to them. Some students may need more directed questing to help facilitate this process. Consider providing an alternative graphic organizer that includes specific list topics (e.g., "My Favorite Hobbies," "My Family and Friends," or "Things That Make Me Happy/Sad/Mad.") This will help students come up with topics that have rich potential as a meaningful poetry topic.
- Multiple Means of Engagement (MME): The process of selecting a topic may be stressful for some students. They may feel that they are making a mistake if they do not pick the perfect topic right away. Assure them that this is part of the writing process. Tell them that sometimes we think we have a great idea but realize that we do not know enough about it to write an entire poem.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
- meaningful (L)
Materials
- Affix List (from Unit 1, Lesson 11; one per student)
- Vocabulary logs (from Unit 1, Lesson 3; one per student)
- Performance Task anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 1)
- Writing a Poem: Planning graphic organizer (one per student and one to display)
- Poetry Options handout (one per student and one to display)
- Photographs to inspire poetry (optional; for students needing additional support)
- Discussion Norms anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 1; added to with students during Work Time C)
- Discussion Norms anchor chart (example, for teacher reference)
- Working to Become Ethical People anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 2)
- Paper (blank and lined; one piece of each per student)
- Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart (begun in Unit 2, Lesson 1)
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
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A. Reviewing Learning Target (10 minutes)
"I can write a poem inspired by something meaningful to me."
"What is the root here?" (mean) "What are the affixes?" (-ing and -ful)
"What does meaningful mean?" (full of meaning) "What is the translation of meaningful in our home languages?" (fuyo u yiyi de in Mandarin) Invite students to use their translation dictionary if necessary. Call on student volunteers to share. Ask other students to choose one translation to silently repeat. Invite students to say their chosen translation out loud when you give the signal. Choral repeat the translations and the word in English. Invite self- and peer correction of the pronunciation of the translations and the English.
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Work Time
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A. Selecting a Topic: Part I (10 minutes)
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B. Selecting a Topic: Part II (15 minutes)
"What can you see in your photograph?" "Close your eyes and imagine you are there. What can you hear? What can you smell?"
"Which one was the easiest to write about? Which one do you think you will have the most ideas about to write a poem?" (Responses will vary.)
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C. Writing Poetry (10 minutes)
"When you write your poem, should you write in formal or informal English? Why?" (informal because writing in formal English means following the rules of writing, which poetry does not have to do) Remind students of the comparison they did between the poetry of Love That Dog and a narrative journal entry in Unit 1. "What is the difference between formal and informal English in writing?" (Writing in formal English means following the rules, such as writing in complete sentences and using punctuation correctly. When you write informally, you don't have to follow those rules.)
"Let me make sure I understand. You're saying that _____?" (Responses will vary.)
"Why is it useful to repeat or paraphrase what a classmate said? (Repeating shows that we are listening carefully and that we heard exactly what a classmate said. Paraphrasing shows that we are listening carefully and that we are attempting to understand what a classmate said.)
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Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Partner Share (5 minutes)
"What inspired you to write poetry, and where can you see evidence of this in your poem?"
"Who can repeat what your classmate said?" (Responses will vary.)
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Homework
Homework | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. |
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