- I can use The Painted Essay® structure to analyze a model. (W.3.2, W.3.5)
- I can fluently read an excerpt of text aloud for an audiobook. (RF.3.4, SL.3.5)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- RF.3.4: Read with sufficient accuracy and fluency to support comprehension.
- W.3.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
- W.3.5: With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing.
- SL.3.5: Create engaging audio recordings of stories or poems that demonstrate fluid reading at an understandable pace; add visual displays when appropriate to emphasize or enhance certain facts or details.
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- The Painted Essay® template (W.3.2)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Engaging the Reader (10 minutes) B. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Analyzing a Model (25 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Reading Fluency Practice: Role-Alike Pairs (20 minutes) 4. Homework A. Practice reading your excerpt aloud for the End of Unit 3 Assessment audiobook. B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. C. For ELLs: Complete Language Dive II Practice in your Unit 3 Homework. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas where students may need additional support:
Areas where students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Prepare the materials required for the Painted Essay and review the Painting an Essay lesson plan (see supporting materials).
- Review the Thumb-O-Meter protocol. (Refer to the Classroom Protocols document for the full version of the protocol.).
- Post: Learning targets, Peer Critique Protocol anchor chart, and Fluent Readers Do These Things anchor chart.
Tech and Multimedia
- Work Time A: Rather than using colored pencils on the displayed Writing Contract: Teacher Model, consider highlighting or using colored text on a word processing document.
- Closing and Assessment A: Record students reading aloud for them to listen back using audio or video recording software or apps such as Audacity or GarageBand. If available, you may consider using a microphone to ensure a good-quality recording.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 3.I.C.9 and 3.I.C.10.
Important points in the lesson itself:
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs with opportunities to unpack an example of the work they are expected to complete during the remainder of the unit. They are also empowered to use a color-coding system that will help them understand essay structure using visual prompts.
- ELLs may find it challenging to absorb an abundance of information and terminology about essay structure. Remind students that this structure is an expanded version of the paragraph structure they completed during the previous unit. Think aloud each part while analyzing the model essay in order to clarify the purpose of each component of the structure. Reassure students that even if they do not understand everything today, they will have plenty of opportunities to work with the concepts throughout the unit and the year.
- In Work Time A, ELLs are invited to participate in a Language Dive conversation (optional). This conversation guides them through expanding the meaning of the focus statement in the Writing Contract: Teacher Model. It also gives students further practice using the sentence structure from the writing contract focus statement. Students may draw on this sentence when writing their reading contracts later in the unit. Review the Language Dive Guide and consider how to invite conversation among students to address the questions and goals suggested under each sentence strip chunk (see supporting materials). Select from the questions and goals provided to best meet your students' needs.
Levels of Support
For lighter support:
- During the Language Dive, challenge students to generate questions about the sentence before asking the prepared questions. Example: "What questions can we ask about this sentence? Let's see if we can answer them together." (What is dialogue?)
For heavier support:
- Create a puzzle of the Writing Contract: Teacher Model using sentence strips or index cards. Use one sentence strip or index card for each paragraph and color-code the text according to the established Painted Essay colors. Challenge students to put the paragraph together in the correct order without looking at their papers. Illustrate key words on the paragraph for extra support.
- During Work Time A, after determining the gist of each paragraph of the Writing Contract: Teacher Model, invite bilingual students to interpret the gist in their home languages.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation: In the basic structure of this lesson, students get multiple representation cues with the color-coding provided by the Painted EssayO template. However, some students may find covering the entire essay in one lesson overwhelming. Consider chunking the explicit instruction for each part of the essay into multiple lessons to provide time for students to comprehend new information.
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression: Fluency is a major learning target in this unit. Fluency is best practiced on or below students' independent reading levels. When necessary, provide students with alternative excerpts that are appropriately leveled for them to practice fluency. Continue formative reading assessments to ensure an appropriate match between reading materials and reading level over time.
- Multiple Means of Engagement: The writing contract is a major assignment in this unit. However, the concept of a contract may not seem relevant to students since they may have never encountered one before. Help build context around contracts by providing real-life examples of times when adults write contracts (accepting a job offer, buying a car, etc.). Tell students that writing and understanding contracts will be important life skills.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
- analyze, Painted Essay, structure (L)
Materials
- Writing Contract: Teacher Model (one per student and one to display)
- Writing Contract: Annotated Teacher Model (for teacher reference)
- End of Unit 3 Assessment, Part II Prompt (from Lesson 1, one per student and one to display)
- Vocabulary logs (from Unit 1, Lesson 5; one per student)
- The Painted Essay(r) template (one per student)
- Paintbrushes (one per student)
- Red, yellow, blue, and green watercolor paints (one set per pair)
- Cups of water (one per pair)
- Painting an Essay lesson plan (for teacher reference)
- Red, yellow, blue, and green colored pencils (one of each for teacher)
- Paper (blank; one piece per student)
- Language Dive Guide: Writing Contract: Teacher Model (optional; for ELLs; for teacher reference)
- Language Dive Sentence strip chunks: Writing Contract: Teacher Model (for ELLs; one to display)
- Language Dive Note-catcher: Writing Contract: Teacher Model (optional; for ELLs; one per student and one to display)
- End of Unit 3 Assessment excerpts (from Lesson 3; one per student)
- Fluent Readers Do These Things anchor chart (begun in Lesson 3)
- Peer Critique Protocol anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 10)
Materials from Previous Lessons
New Materials
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
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A. Engaging the Reader (10 minutes)
"What is the purpose of this document?" (It is a contract explaining the writing challenges the author faces and the strategies he or she intends to implement to overcome those challenges.) "What are the challenges?" (writing sentences that make sense and punctuating dialogue) "What are the strategies for overcoming those challenges?" (reading the sentence aloud, asking someone else to read it aloud, referring to a model, and asking a peer to focus on this challenge when providing peer feedback)
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B. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)
"I can use the Painted Essay structure to analyze a model."
"What does structure mean?" (how something is organized, arranged, or put together; if students are unsure, invite a student to look it up in the dictionary for the group) "What is the translation of structure in our home languages?" (sostav in Russian) Invite students to use their translation dictionary if necessary. Call on student volunteers to share. Ask other students to choose one translation to quietly repeat. Invite students to say their chosen translation out loud when you give the signal. Choral repeat the translations and the word in English. Invite self- and peer-correction of the pronunciation of the translations and the English.
"What does analyze mean?" (examine in detail) "Why might we want to analyze the model? How will it help us?" (to understand the structure of the model in order to apply that to writing our own contract)
"Who can tell us what your classmate said in your own words?" (Responses will vary.) |
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Work Time
Work Time | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Analyzing a Model (25 minutes)
"What is the gist of this paragraph?" (Writing is an important skill, but it can be challenging because there are a lot of rules to learn.)
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Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Reading Fluency Practice: Role-Alike Pairs (20 minutes)
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Homework
Homework | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Practice reading your excerpt aloud for the End of Unit 3 Assessment audiobook. B. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. C. For ELLs: Complete Language Dive II Practice in your Unit 3 Homework. |
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