- I can identify the writing criteria for our Feathered Friends Saver. (W.1.2, SL.1.2, SL.1.3)
- I can identify the scientific drawing criteria for our Feathered Friends Saver. (SL.1.2, SL.1.3)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- SL.1.1: Participate in collaborative conversations with diverse partners about grade 1 topics and texts with peers and adults in small and larger groups.
- SL.1.2: Ask and answer questions about key details in a text read aloud or information presented orally or through other media.
- SL.1.3: Ask and answer questions about what a speaker says in order to gather additional information or clarify something that is not understood.
- L.1.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
- L.1.1f: Use frequently occurring adjectives.
- L.1.4: Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases based on grade 1 reading and content, choosing flexibly from an array of strategies.
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- During the Bird Adjectives activity in the Opening, continue to use the Language Checklist to track student progress toward L.1.1f (see Assessment Overview and Resources).
- During Work Times A and B, use the Speaking and Listening Checklist to track student progress toward SL.1.1 and SL.1.2 (see Assessment Overview and Resources).
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Developing Language: Bird Adjectives (10 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Analyzing a Model: Feathered Friends Saver: Informational Writing (20 minutes) B. Analyzing a Model: Feathered Friends Saver: Scientific Drawing (20 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Engaging the Learner: Voting on Local Birds (10 minutes) |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How this lesson builds on previous work:
Areas in which students may need additional support:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Determine pairs for Work Time B.
- Post: Learning targets and applicable anchor charts (see materials list).
Tech and Multimedia
Consider using an interactive white board or document camera to display lesson materials.
- Continue to use the technology tools recommended throughout Modules 1-3 to create anchor charts to share with families; to record students as they participate in discussions and protocols to review with students later and to share with families; and for students to listen to and annotate text, record ideas on note-catchers, and word-process writing.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards I.B.6, I.B.7, and I.C.12
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs through opportunities to analyze a model to understand the structure and language needed to make a Feathered Friends Saver and write an informative paragraph. This lesson scaffolds to the performance task on W.1.6.
- ELLs may find it challenging to stay focused during Work Times A and B when they analyze the writing and scientific drawing criteria for the Feathered Friends Saver (see levels of support and the Meeting Students' Needs column).
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- In Work Time A, invite a small group of students to demonstrate what actions to perform depending on the part of the informative writing that is being read.
For heavier support:
- In the Opening, consider modeling examples of how birds show the adjectives for the last column of the Birds Adjectives anchor chart. (Birds are amazing because they can fly. Birds are important because they are part of the food chain. Birds are fascinating because they can build their own nests.)
- Review resources from previous work in Modules 3-4 to choose a bird fact to match to an adjective (e.g., Beaks: Class Notes, Feathers: Class Notes, Stories of Bird Helpers anchor chart, Pale Male: Class Notes).
- Preview the questions on page 6 of the Caring for Birds notebook using a copy of the Model Feathered Friends Saver and annotate as needed.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation (MMR): Continue to support students by offering options for perception. Pausing for clarification of new vocabulary will also help students who may need additional support with comprehension.
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression (MMAE): Continue to support students learning to monitor their own progress by prompting them to identify the type of feedback they are seeking during this lesson.
- Multiple Means of Engagement (MME): Invite students to reflect on their learning from previous lessons to support them in understanding the value and relevance of the activities in this lesson. Continue to provide prompts and sentence frames for those students who require them.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
Review:
- adjective, amazing, important, fascinating, criteria (L)
Materials
- Bird Adjectives anchor chart (begun in Lesson 7; added to in advance; see supporting materials)
- Bird Adjectives anchor chart (begun in Lesson 7; example, for teacher reference)
- Back-to-Back and Face-to-Face Protocol anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- Bird Adjective cards 1-3 (from Lesson 7; one set per class)
- Model Feathered Friends Saver: Scientific Drawing (one per student and one to display; see Performance Task Overview)
- Questions about Feathered Friends Saver anchor chart (begun in Lesson 1)
- A Place for Birds (from Lesson 2; one to display; for teacher read-aloud)
- Feathered Friends Saver: Performance Task Invitation (one to display; see Performance Task Overview)
- Model Feathered Friends Saver: Informational Writing (one to display; see Performance Task Overview)
- Feathered Friends Saver Criteria anchor chart (new; teacher-created; see Performance Task Overview)
- Feathered Friends Saver Criteria anchor chart (example, for teacher reference; see Performance Task Overview)
- Parts of an Informative Paragraph anchor chart (begun in Module 3)
- Caring for Birds notebook (begun in Lesson 1; added to during Work Time B; page 6; one per student and one to display)
- Caring for Birds notebook (from Lesson 1; example, for teacher reference)
- Local Birds voting sheet (one per student and one to display)
- Pencils (one per student)
Assessment
Each unit in the K-2 Language Arts Curriculum has one standards-based assessment built in. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
Opening | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Developing Language: Bird Adjectives (10 minutes)
"What is one fact that gives an example of how birds are amazing?" (Responses will vary.)
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Work Time
Work Time | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Analyzing a Model: Feathered Friends Saver: Informational Writing (20 minutes)
"Why do people mark their windows?" (so that birds won't crash into them) "How can people help birds and keep them from crashing into windows?" (mark their windows by adding images) Conversation Cue: "Who can tell us what your classmate said in your own words?" (Responses will vary.)
"How could the Feathered Friends Saver help mark windows?" (Responses will vary, but may include: You can put the image on windows so birds won't fly into them.)
"I can identify the writing criteria for our Feathered Friends Saver."
"What do you notice on this model?" (Responses will vary, but may include: writing, typing) Conversation Cue: "Who can add on to what your classmate said?" (Responses will vary.)
"This is the introduction sentence. The adjective in this sentence that describes birds is helpful."
"This is one of the detail sentences that includes evidence and elaboration to support the focus statement."
"This is the second detail sentence that includes evidence and elaboration to support the focus statement."
"This is the conclusion. The conclusion wraps up your paragraph and reminds the reader of the big idea."
"When I read the adjective that describes the bird, put one hand in the air." "When I read one piece of evidence with elaboration, touch your head." "When I read the second piece of evidence with elaboration, touch your nose." "When I read the conclusion, clap once."
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"Birds are helpful when they spread seeds because plants can grow so people have food to eat." "Birds are helpful because they eat pests and because they are food for bigger animals." (MMR)
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B. Analyzing a Model: Feathered Friends Saver: Scientific Drawing (20 minutes)
"I can identify the scientific drawing criteria for our Feathered Friends Saver."
"What are some of the criteria that we used for our expert bird drawings when we created our riddle cards?" (thinking about shapes, size, placement, and details)
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"What is one thing that is new on this scientific drawing that was not included on the expert bird drawing for the riddle cards?"
"What is different between the scientific drawing we did in Module 3 and the one we are doing now?" (MMR)
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Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Engaging the Learner: Voting on Local Birds (10 minutes)
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