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ELA 2019 G6:M2:U3:L2

Plan a Collaborative Problem-Solution Essay

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Focus Standards: These are the standards the instruction addresses.

  • RI.6.1, RI.6.7, W.6.2, W.6.4, W.6.5, W.6.8, SL.6.2

Supporting Standards: These are the standards that are incidental—no direct instruction in this lesson, but practice of these standards occurs as a result of addressing the focus standards.

  • SL.6.1b, L.6.6

Daily Learning Targets

  • I can collaboratively plan a problem-solution essay about William. (W.6.2)

Ongoing Assessment

  • Opening A: Entrance Ticket (W.6.2, W.6.10)
  • Work Time B: Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William (RI.6.1, RI.6.7, W.6.2, W.6.4, W.6.5, W.6.8, W.6.9b, SL.6.2, L.6.6)
  • Homework A: Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William (RI.6.1, RI.6.7, W.6.2, W.6.4, W.6.5, W.6.8, W.6.9b, SL.6.2, L.6.6)

Agenda

AgendaTeaching Notes

1. Opening

A. Engage the Learner - W.6.2 (5 minutes)

2. Work Time

A. Guided Practice: Analyze a Model - W.6.5 (15 minutes)

B. Group Practice: Plan a Problem-Solution Essay - W.6.2 (20 minutes)

3. Closing and Assessment

A. Debrief: Informative Writing Checklist - W.6.2 (5 minutes)

4. Homework

A. Plan Collaborative Problem-Solution Essay: Students work to complete their Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William.

B. Independent Research Reading: Students read for at least 20 minutes in their independent research reading text. Then they select a prompt and write a response in their independent reading journal.

Alignment to Assessment Standards and Purpose of Lesson

  • W.6.2 – Opening A: Students complete an entrance ticket in which they reread the Model Problem-Solution Essay: “Bridges to Prosperity” and compare an effective sentence against the Informative Writing checklist.
  • W.6.5 – Work Time A: Students analyze the Model Problem-Solution Writing Planner: “Bridges to Prosperity” and prepare to outline their own problem-solution essays.
  • RI.6.1 – Work Time B: Students plan a problem-solution essay, using textual evidence from their note-catchers to support their analysis of a critical problem in The Boy Who Harnessed the Wind.
  • RI.6.7 – Work Time B: Students integrate information collected from different media to plan their collaborative problem-solution essays.
  • W.6.2 – Work Time B: Students work with their partners to select, organize, and analyze relevant content in order to plan their problem solution essays.
  • W.6.4 – Work Time B: Students consider task, purpose, and audience as they plan the content of their essays.
  • W.6.5 – Work Time B: With support from their partners, students plan their problem-solution essays.
  • W.6.8 – Work Time B: Students quote and paraphrase information they have gathered from multiple print and digital sources as they complete their writing planners.
  • SL.6.2 – Work Time B: Students collaborate to interpret the information they have collected from diverse media and explain how it contributes to their collaborative problem-solution essays.
  • W.6.2 – Closing and Assessment A: In collaboration with peers, students develop criteria for a strong problem solution essay.
  • In this lesson, students focus on working to contribute to a better world, using their strengths when working with a partner to give and receive feedback on their plans.

Opportunities to Extend Learning

  • Some students may not need the level of scaffolding provided in this lesson. Release them to work independently if they are ready to begin filling in the Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William without additional support.

How It Builds on Previous Work

  • In the previous lesson, students analyzed the structure of the model essay using the Painted Essay® template. In this lesson, students will follow the steps the writer took to compose the essay by examining a model note-catcher and model writing planner.

Support All Students

  • Note that there is a differentiated version of the entrance ticket used in Opening A in the supporting materials download. ▲
  • Much of this lesson is discussion based, so consider how to best support students who need additional help with oral language and/or auditory processing.
  • This lesson requires a number of different materials. Use an organizational system that simplifies materials management for students. For example, put a green sticker dot on any handouts related to William, a red dot for handouts related to the model, and a yellow dot for handouts that students will fill in themselves. Additionally, print copies of the handouts on colored paper, printing all materials related to the model one color, those related to the collaborative essay a different color, and all materials for the independent essay a third color.
  • If time is a concern, use a Jigsaw protocol during the essay annotation in Work Time A. Separate the class into three groups, and assign one paragraph of the essay per group. Students can share their annotations with members of the other groups rather than have every group annotate every paragraph. ▲
  • Some students may feel more prepared than others to contribute to the writing planners with a partner. Emphasize that planning writing is a process and collaboration is mutually beneficial. Remind students that they can continue to complete their planners at home if they were unable to complete the entire task during Work Time B.

Assessment Guidance

  • Ensure that students understand how the note-catcher leads into the writing planner and then the essay. Students should see writing as a process beginning with gathering information, then organizing that information, then, finally, presenting the information in a composition.
  • Consider using the Grade 6 Writing Process checklist to assess students’ writing abilities in Work Time B (see the Tools page: http://eled.org/tools).

Down the Road

  • In the next lesson, students will use their completed writing planner continue working on their collaborative essay, focusing specifically on drafting the introduction.

In Advance

  • Strategically form writing partnerships for the collaborative writing process. Keep in mind that these partners will be working together for several lessons. Consider also if triads rather than pairs is a better option for the collaborative writing task.
  • Review the content in the Model Design Solution: "Bridges to Prosperity" note-catcher, Model Problem-Solution Writing Planner: "Bridges to Prosperity," and Model Problem-Solution Essay: "Bridges to Prosperity" in preparation for guiding students to see how each reflects the others.
  • Review the Informative Writing checklist (example for teacher reference) to determine the specific criteria that should be included in the second column, Characteristics of This Informative Essay.
  • Review the student tasks and example answers to get familiar with what students will be required to do in the lesson (see Materials list).
  • Prepare copies of handouts for students, including the entrance ticket (see Materials list).
  • Post the learning targets and applicable anchor charts (see Materials list).

Tech and Multimedia

  • Work Time A: Display and play the TED Talk: Avery Bang: "Building Bridges and Connecting Communities" in its entirety to provide context for the model essay.
  • Work Time B: Students may prefer to complete their Problem-Solution Writing Plan graphic organizer in an online word-processing document such as http://eled.org/0158.

Supporting English Language Learners

Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 6.I.A.1, 6.I.A.4, 6.I.B.6, 6.I.B.7, 6.I.C.10, 6.I.C.11, 6.I.C.12, 6.II.A.1, 6.II.A.2, 6.II.B.5, 6.II.C.6, and 6.II.C.7.

Important Points in the Lesson Itself

  • To support ELLs, this lesson models the process of collecting information on a note-catcher, adapting this information for a writing planner, and then finally, producing an essay based on the planner. By working with the note-catcher and planner for the "Bridges to Prosperity" problem-solution essay, students can practice these steps before applying them to the planning of their own collaborative essays about William later in the lesson. Taking the time to understand the relationship across these materials and how they inform one another clarifies expectations for ELLs as they prepare and produce their own writing and highlights the nature of writing as an iterative, multistep process (i.e., one in which learning is incremental and perfection is not expected).
  • ELLs may find it challenging to collaboratively plan an essay during Work Time B, even though they completed a similar task in Module 1. Take the time to pair students very strategically, taking into consideration English language proficiency, writing abilities, and general rapport. Help students develop collaborative strategies that work for them and their partners (e.g., negotiating ideas aloud before writing them independently; writing independently first and then comparing notes and adding or modifying note-catchers as need; designating alternating "scribes" to take notes as the other student shares ideas aloud).

Vocabulary

  • point (A)

Key

(A): Academic Vocabulary

(DS): Domain-Specific Vocabulary

Materials from Previous Lessons

Teacher

Student

  • Academic word wall (one for display; from Module 1, Unit 1, Lesson 1, Opening A)
  • Criteria for Effective Informative Writing anchor chart (one for display; from Module 1, Unit 2, Lesson 8, Work Time B)
  • Work to Become Effective Learners anchor chart (one for display; from Module 1, Unit 1, Lesson 1, Work Time A)
  • Work to Become Ethical People anchor chart (one for display; from Module 1, Unit 1, Lesson 1, Work Time A)
  • Work to Contribute to a Better World anchor chart (one for display; from Module 1, Unit 3, Lesson 8, Closing and Assessment A)
  • Design Solution: William note-catcher (example for teacher reference) (from Module 2, Unit 1, Lesson 13, Work Time A)
  • Model Problem-Solution Essay: "Bridges to Prosperity" (example for teacher reference) (from Module 2, Unit 3, Lesson 1, Work Time A)
  • Informative Writing Checklist (example for teacher reference) (from Module 2, Unit 3, Lesson 1, Closing and Assessment A)
  • Informative Writing checklist (one per student and one for display; from Module 2, Unit 3, Lesson 1, Closing and Assessment A)
  • Model Problem-Solution Essay: "Bridges to Prosperity" (one per student and one for display; from Module 2, Unit 3, Lesson 1, Work Time A)
  • Model Design Solution: "Bridges to Prosperity" note-catcher (one per student; from Module 2, Unit 2, Lesson 6, Work Time A)
  • Design Solution: William note-catcher (one per student; from Module 2, Unit 1, Lesson 13, Work Time A)
  • Independent reading journal (one per student; begun in Module 1, Unit 1, Lesson 6, Work Time B)

New Materials

Teacher

Student

  • Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 2 (example for teacher reference)
  • Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William (for teacher reference)
  • Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 2 (one per student)
  • Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 2 ▲
  • Model Problem-Solution Writing Planner: “Bridges to Prosperity” (one per student)
  • Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William (one per student)

Assessment

Each unit in the 6-8 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize students' understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.

Opening

OpeningLevels of Support

A. Engage the Learner – W.6.2 (5 minutes)

  • Repeated routine: Follow the same routine as previous lessons to distribute and review Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 2 or Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 2 ▲. Refer to the Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 2 (example for teacher reference) for possible responses. Students will need their Informative Writing checklist and their Model Problem-Solution Essay: “Bridges to Prosperity.” Also ensure that the Criteria for Effective Informative Writing anchor chart is posted.
  • Repeated routine: Follow the same routine as with the previous lessons to review learning targets and the purpose of the lesson, reminding students of any learning targets that are similar or the same as in previous lessons.
  • Focus students on the three Habits of Character anchor charts and invite them to read them to themselves. Tell students to choose a habit of character to focus on as they work today.

For Lighter Support

  • N/A

For Heavier Support

  • During Opening A, invite students who need heavier support to use the Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 2  ▲ . This resource offers a bank of possible sentences and criteria that students can select from to address the prompt. Providing options to choose from will help hone student attention and keep ELLs from feeling overwhelmed by the task.

Work Time

Work TimeLevels of Support

A. Guided Practice: Analyze a Model - W.6.5 (15 minutes)

  • Distribute and display the Model Design Solution: "Bridges to Prosperity" note-catcher. Distribute the Model Problem-Solution Writing Planner: "Bridges to Prosperity." Ask students to lay the two model handouts side-by-side.
  • Tell students that the writer of the model used research to plan the essay. Ask students which of the documents they have in front of them was used to record the research the writer conducted (note-catcher) and which was used to plan the essay (writing planner).
  • Explain that students will examine these two models to understand how the author moved from the note-catcher to the writing planner. The goal is to follow the same procedure as they work collaboratively to plan a problem-solution essay about William Kamkwamba, and, eventually, to independently plan a problem-solution essay about the innovator they researched in Unit 2.
  • Direct students' attention to the writing planner. Invite one student to find the research question and read it aloud.

"How was design thinking used to solve a critical problem?"

  • Ask students to put their finger on the My Focus section. Invite one student to read it aloud.

"How Avery Bang and Bridges to Prosperity used design thinking to solve a critical problem."

  • Ask:

"What do these two lines have in common?" (They both have to do with using design thinking to solve a critical problem.)

"How do these two lines differ?" (One is the more general research question; the other shows how this particular essay will focus on a specific answer to that question.)

  • Direct students to find the Introduction section on the writing planner, and invite one student to read the first question and answer aloud.

"How will I catch the reader's attention? Scenario about having to cross a dangerous river with no bridge to get to school, work, or the doctor."

  • Invite students to turn their attention to the note-catcher.
  • Ask:

"Where do you see the answer to this first question, the scenario about having to cross a dangerous river, described on the note-catcher?" (Part I, section A, under Critical Problem; Part II, section B, under Critical Problem)

  • Invite students to mark these specific pieces of information with a large capital I for Introduction on the model note-catcher.
  • Direct students back to the Introduction section of the model writing planner, and invite one student to read the second question and answer aloud.

"What context do I need to give my reader? Explain who Avery Bang and Bridges to Prosperity are, and how she became interested in the problem."

  • Direct students back to the note-catcher.
  • Ask:

"Where do you see the answer to this second question, the context, described on the note-catcher?" (Part I, section A. General Overview; Part I, section B. Design Process)

  • Invite students to mark these specific pieces of information with a large capital I for Introduction.
  • Direct students back to the Introduction section of the writing planner, and invite one student to read the third statement and answer aloud.

"My focus statement: B2P builds footbridges that connect people with the resources they need. Helping rural communities access resources and services is a complex problem. Using design thinking, B2P is able to solve it."

  • Turn and Talk:

"Does this focus statement adequately answer the research question? Explain your thinking." (Yes, because the focus statement includes the information under My Focus. The focus statement also uses the key terms "problem," "solution," and "design thinking," which reflect the key terms in the research question.)

  • Direct students back to the Introduction section of the Model Problem-Solution Writing Planner: "Bridges to Prosperity," and invite one student to read the fourth question and answer aloud.

"What are the main points I will be making to support this focus? Explain the problem: No way to cross rivers in rural communities to reach necessary services and resources. Explain the solution: Building bridges to connect people and give them access."

  • Direct students to the Model Design Solution: "Bridges to Prosperity" note-catcher.
  • Ask:

"Where do you see the main points described on the note-catcher?" (Part I, section A. General Overview; Part I, section B. Design Process)

  • Invite students to mark these specific pieces of information with a large capital I for Introduction.
  • Explain that students will follow this same process to annotate the Model Design Solution: "Bridges to Prosperity" note-catcher based on the information included in the Model Problem-Solution Writing Planner: "Bridges to Prosperity." Direct students to use the following annotations for the remaining three sections:
    • PR = Proof Paragraph for Point 1: PROBLEM
    • SO = Proof Paragraph for Point 2: SOLUTION
    • C = Conclusion
  • Write or display these directions on the board to aid comprehension.
  • Move students into predetermined writing partners--those who will be planning and drafting the entire collaborative essay together during Lessons 2-6.
  • Circulate and monitor as writing partners make their annotations. Ensure that the connection between the two documents is clear and that students are annotating the correct information.
  • Invite students to reflect on their progress toward the relevant learning target, using a checking for understanding technique. Scan student responses and make a note of students who might need support. Check in with them moving forward.
  • If productive, cue students to think about their own thinking during this exercise:

"How does our discussion add to your understanding of this assignment?"

For Lighter Support

  • The Guided Practice: Analyze a Model exercise of Work Time A is largely discussion-based. Use this an opportunity to challenge ELLs who need lighter support to produce increasingly complex or precise language. Strategically use Goal 3 Conversation Cues to push students to provide evidence for their answers (e.g., "Why do you think that?"), challenge their own thinking (e.g., "Can you figure out the Writing Planner says it this way?"), and practice metacognition (e.g., "How does our discussion add to your understanding of the writing process?").

For Heavier Support

The Guided Practice: Analyze a Model exercise of Work Time A is largely discussion-based, which may be especially challenging for students who need heavier support and who may easily feel overwhelmed in a large class discussion. Strategically use Goal 1 Conversation Cues to allow students time think and process language internally (e.g., "I'll give you time to think and write or sketch") and clarify their statements (e.g., "So, do you mean _____?").

B. Group Practice: Plan a Problem-Solution Essay - W.6.2 (20 minutes)

  • Distribute the Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William. Ask students to retrieve their Design Solution: William note-catcher, which they have been filling in throughout Unit 2. Explain that they will be using these documents to collaboratively plan and write a problem-solution essay about how William Kamkwamba used design thinking to solve a critical problem.
  • For today, students will focus only on filling in the writing planner with their partner based on information from the Design Solution: William note-catcher.
  • Ensure that students understand their task before releasing them to begin working.
  • Circulate and monitor, using the Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William (example for teacher reference) as necessary.
  • With one minute remaining, refocus students' attention. Explain that if they were unable to complete the Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William during this time, they will need to complete it for homework in preparation for drafting the introduction in the next lesson.
  • Invite students to reflect on their progress toward the relevant learning target, using a checking for understanding. Scan student responses and make a note of students who might need support. Check in with them moving forward.
  • N/A

Closing & Assessments

Closing

A. Debrief: Informative Writing Checklist - W.6.2 (5 minutes)

  • Display and invite students to retrieve their Informative Writing checklist. Point out the following characteristics:

"W.6.9a, RL.6.1: My focus shows that I clearly understand the topic or text and is well supported with evidence from reliable sources."

"W.6.2a: I provide a clear focus and maintain the focus consistently throughout the piece."

  • Focus students on the empty column of their checklist. Remind them that while every piece of informative writing should include the criteria listed, each piece will have specific criteria according to the content.
  • Ask:

"Are there any specific criteria you should be aware of and list in that column on the checklist?" (Responses will vary, but may include the following: The essay shows that I understand my research and the task of explaining a critical problem and its design solution. The essay is focused on how an innovator used design thinking to solve a critical problem. It also recognizes the habits of character that were demonstrated in the process.)

  • As students share out, capture their responses in the Characteristics of This Informative Essay column as needed. Refer to the Informative Writing checklist (example for teacher reference) as needed. Consider also adding these distinctions to the Criteria for an Effective Informative Essay anchor chart.

Homework

Homework

A. Plan Collaborative Problem-Solution Essay

  • Students work to complete their Problem-Solution Writing Planner: William

B. Independent Research Reading

  • Students read for at least 20 minutes in their independent research reading text. Then they select a prompt and write a response in their independent reading journal.

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