- I can write an introduction to a presentation about what inspired me to write my poem, using complete sentences. (W.4.2a, W.4.2b, W.4.4, L.4.1f)
- I can analyze someone reading aloud effectively to generate criteria for reading fluency. (R.4.4, R.4.4a, R.4.4b, R.4.4c)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- RF.4.4: Read with sufficient accuracy and fluency to support comprehension.
- RF.4.4a: Read grade-level text with purpose and understanding.
- RF.4.4b: Read grade-level prose and poetry orally with accuracy, appropriate rate, and expression on successive readings.
- RF.4.4c: Use context to confirm or self-correct word recognition and understanding, rereading as necessary.
- W.4.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
- W.4.2a: Introduce a topic clearly and group related information in paragraphs and sections; include formatting (e.g., headings), illustrations, and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
- SL.4.4: Report on a topic or text, tell a story, or recount an experience in an organized manner, using appropriate facts and relevant, descriptive details to support main ideas or themes; speak clearly at an understandable pace.
- L.4.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
- L.4.1f: Produce complete sentences, recognizing and correcting inappropriate fragments and run-ons.
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- Annotated model poetry presentation
- Poetry presentation introduction (W.4.2a, W.4.2b, W.4.4, L.4.1f)
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Engaging the Writer: Performance Task Anchor Chart (5 minutes) B. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Introducing a Model: Analyzing the Structure (15 minutes) B. Writing a Poetry Presentation: Introduction (20 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. Launching Reading Fluency (15 minutes) 4. Homework A. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. B. For ELLs: Complete the Language Dive Practice in your Unit 3 Homework. |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How it builds on previous work:
Areas in which students may need additional support:
Assessment guidance:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Strategically group students into triads with at least one strong reader in each triad.
- Prepare copies of final drafts of student poems to return to students.
- Review the Thumb-O-Meter protocol. See Classroom Protocols.
- Post: Learning targets, Performance Task anchor chart, and Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart.
Tech and Multimedia
- Work Time A: For students who will benefit from hearing the text read aloud multiple times, consider using a text to speech tool such as Natural Reader, SpeakIt! for Google Chrome or the Safari reader. Note that to use a web based text to speech to tool such as SpeakIt! or Safari reader, you will need to create an online doc--for example, a Google Doc, containing the text.
- Work Time B: Students write their presentations using word processing software--for example, a Google Doc.
- Work Time B: Students use Speech to Text facilities activated on devices, or using an app or software such as Dictation.io.
- Closing and Assessment A: Create anchor chart on a collaborative document--for example, a Google Doc--for students to have access to outside the classroom.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 4.I.A.1, 4.I.A.2, 4.I.A.3, 4.I.A.4, 4.I.C.9, 4.I.C.10, 4.I.C.11, 4.I.C.12, and 4.II.A.1
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs with opportunities to discuss the gist of each paragraph of a new model essay.
- ELLs may find identifying the parts of the essay challenging because they will first need to understand the meaning of the essay (see Meeting Students' Needs column).
- Outline the conventional presentation structure in the United States. As taught in this lesson, speakers begin the presentation with an introduction to set context (what the poet is inspired by and why); they continue with a proof paragraph citing evidence (of inspiration); and then they provide a conclusion to wrap up the essay and reflect (restates the inspiration and what the reader should take away). Although presentation structure is different in many countries and sometimes in different genres, let ELLs know that the structure taught here is often what teachers and other readers expect to see in the United States. Mastering this formula can help ELLs deliver clear, easy to understand, organized presentations.
- In Work Time A, ELLs are invited to participate in a Language Dive. This conversation focuses on a sentence from the model poetry presentation to reinforce the use of the relative pronoun which and to connect the first part of the sentence that describes the inspiration for the poem with the second part that gives evidence from the poem. Students may draw on their understanding of the content and structure of this sentence as they write their own poetry presentations. Preview the Language Dive Guide and consider how to invite conversation among students to address the questions and goals suggested under each sentence strip chunk (see supporting materials). Select from the questions and goals provided to best meet your students' needs.
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- Invite students to create their own sentence stems for the introduction or to modify the stems provided.
- During Work Time A, challenge students to generate questions about the model presentation before asking the prepared questions. Example: "What questions can we ask about this sentence? Let's see if we can answer them together." (What is the purpose of this writing? What is it about? What is the structure?)
For heavier support:
- Consider discussing, acting out, sketching, and paraphrasing the meaning of some key sentences from the model poetry presentation before class so that students can more fully participate.
- For students who may need additional support, highlight, label, and distribute less complex models of the model poetry presentation or invite students to highlight and label other models.
- Work with emerging writers in advance to ensure their final draft poem is not necessarily perfect but comprehensible. If there are many barriers to comprehensibility, give students the option to focus on making one or two lines or stanzas comprehensible.
- Consider providing students with a recording of the fluency passages from Closing and Assessment and Homework in Lessons 4-7. Allow them to practice reading aloud with the recorded text.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation (MMR): In this lesson, students need to access the model poetry presentation in order to develop their own presentation. Ensure students have multiple and varied opportunities to engage with the model essay to facilitate greater comprehension. (Examples: Cut the essay into sentence strips and have students reorder them. Read the essay aloud and have students provide a nonverbal signal when you read specific parts of the text. Think aloud as you dissect the model text.)
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression (MMAE): Provide multiple options for students to organize their writing. Consider providing a graphic organizer or allowing them to outline their presentation via a PowerPoint presentation or Prezi.
- Multiple Means of Engagement (MME): Build engagement for this lesson and student presentations by sharing videos of poets sharing their own poetry. One engaging idea may be to show poetry slams with interactive audiences. Select poetry topics that are relevant and relatable to the students.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
- generate, criteria, effective, effectively (L)
Materials
- Performance Task anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 1)
- Vocabulary logs (from Unit 1, Lesson 3; one per student)
- Model poetry presentation (one per student and one to display)
- Working to Become Effective Learners anchor chart (begun in Unit 2, Lesson 1)
- Poetry Presentation: Annotated Teacher Model (for teacher reference)
- Poetry Presentation Structure anchor chart (new; co-created with students during Work Time A)
- Poetry Presentation Structure anchor chart (example, for teacher reference)
- Language Dive Guide: Model Poetry Presentation (optional; for ELLs; for teacher reference; see supporting materials)
- Language Dive Note-catcher: Model Poetry Presentation (optional; for ELLs; one per student and one to display, see supporting materials)
- Language Dive Sentence strip chunks: Model Poetry Presentation (optional; for ELLs; one to display, see supporting materials)
- Black and orange markers (one of each per student)
- Poem (begun in Lesson 1; one per student; see Teaching Notes)
- Paper (lined; one piece per student)
- Domain-Specific Word Wall (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 3)
- End of Unit 3 Assessment prompt (one per student and one to display; see Assessment Overview and Resources)
- Love That Dog (from Unit 1, Lesson 2; one for teacher read-aloud)
- Fluent Readers Do These Things anchor chart (new; co-created with students during Closing and Assessment)
- Fluent Readers Do These Things anchor chart (example, for teacher reference)
Assessment
Each unit in the 3-5 Language Arts Curriculum has two standards-based assessments built in, one mid-unit assessment and one end of unit assessment. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
Opening | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Engaging the Writer: Revisiting the Performance Task Anchor Chart (5 minutes)
"How do you feel about books? How do you feel about reading? Are books and reading important? Why or why not?" (Responses will vary.)
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B. Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)
"I can write an introduction to a presentation about what inspired me to write my poem, using complete sentences." "I can analyze someone reading aloud effectively to generate criteria for reading fluency."
"What are criteria?" (a list of standards that we can follow when creating our own word)
"What does generate mean? When we generate something, what do we do?" (We produce or create something.)
"What word could you replace this with for the learning target to still have the same meaning?" (successful, good)
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"What is the difference between the words effective and effectively?" (Effective is an adjective or word to describe a noun, or thing. It means successful. Effectively is an adverb or word to describe a verb or action. It means to do something in a way that is successful.) "Which word does each describe?" (Effective describes presentation; effectively describes read aloud.)
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Work Time
Work Time | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Introducing a Model: Analyzing the Structure (15 minutes)
"What is this presentation about?" (It is about what inspired the poet to write the poem, and where you can see evidence of that inspiration in the poem.)
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B. Writing a Poetry Presentation: Introduction (20 minutes)
"What information has the poet included in the introduction? Why?" (It includes what the poem was inspired by, why the poet is inspired by the source of inspiration, and how this is conveyed in the poem. The poet has included this information in the introduction so that the listener understands what the poet was inspired by and has an initial idea of how this is conveyed in the poem.)
"Who can repeat what your classmate said?" (Responses will vary.)
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"Can you figure out why writers write an introduction?" Tell students you will give them time to think and discuss with their partner. (Responses will vary, but may include: to set context; to say what the presentation will be about.)
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Closing & Assessments
Closing | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Launching Reading Fluency (15 minutes)
"What is this prompt asking you to do?" (Read a new poem fluently and accurately.)
"How will this assessment prepare you for the performance task?" (For the performance task, we will read aloud our poems, so practicing reading fluency will help us do this effectively.)
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Homework
Homework | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Accountable Research Reading. Select a prompt and respond in the front of your independent reading journal. B. For ELLs: Complete the Language Dive Practice in your Unit 3 Homework. |
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