- I can revise and edit my opinion paragraph using a checklist. (L.1.1, L.1.1d, L.1.2, L.1.2a, L.1.2bk, L.1.2d, L.1.2e, L.1.6)
- I can discuss my opinion about Pale Male's nest using a compelling reason to support my opinion. (SL.1.1, SL.1.1a, SL.1.1.b)
These are the CCS Standards addressed in this lesson:
- SL.1.1: Participate in collaborative conversations with diverse partners about grade 1 topics and texts with peers and adults in small and larger groups.
- SL.1.1a: Follow agreed-upon rules for discussions (e.g., listening to others with care, speaking one at a time about the topics and texts under discussion).
- SL.1.1b: Build on others' talk in conversations by responding to the comments of others through multiple exchanges.
- L.1.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
- L.1.1d: Use personal, possessive, and indefinite pronouns (e.g., I, me, my; they, them, their, anyone, everything).
- L.1.1h: Use determiners (e.g., articles, demonstratives).
- L.1.2: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing.
- L.1.2a: Capitalize dates and names of people.
- L.1.2b: Use end punctuation for sentences.
- L.1.2d: Use conventional spelling for words with common spelling patterns and for frequently occurring irregular words.
- L.1.2e: Spell untaught words phonetically, drawing on phonemic awareness and spelling conventions.
- L.1.6: Use words and phrases acquired through conversations, reading and being read to, and responding to texts, including using frequently occurring conjunctions to signal simple relationships (e.g., because).
Daily Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
- During Work Time A, use the Opinion Writing Rubric to assess student progress on L.1.1, L1.1a, L.1.1d, L.1.2, L.1.2a, L.1.2b, 1.2e, and L.1.6. (see Assessment Overview and Resources).
- During Work Times B and C, monitor students' conversations for progress on L standards (L.1.1, L.1.1d, L.1.1h, L.1.6).
Agenda
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1. Opening A. Engaging the Learner: "Two Sides of the Story" (5 minutes) 2. Work Time A. Revising and Editing Our Writing: Unit 2 Assessment Opinion Paragraph (15 minutes) B. Pinky Partners Protocol: What's Your Opinion? (15 minutes) C. Vote with Your Feet Protocol: What's Your Opinion? (15 minutes) 3. Closing and Assessment A. End of Unit Reflection (10 minutes) |
Purpose of lesson and alignment to standards:
How this lesson builds on previous work:
Areas in which students may need additional support:
Down the road:
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In Advance
- Pre-distribute materials for Work Times A and B at student workspaces.
- Review the Vote with Your Feet protocol. (See the Classroom Protocols document for the full version of the protocol.)
- Post: Learning targets and applicable anchor charts (see materials list).
Tech and Multimedia
Consider using an interactive white board or document camera to display lesson materials.
- Continue to use the technology tools recommended throughout Modules 1-3 to create anchor charts to share with families; to record students as they participate in discussions and protocols to review with students later and to share with families; and for students to listen to and annotate text, record ideas on note-catchers, and word-process writing.
Supporting English Language Learners
Supports guided in part by CA ELD Standards 1.I.A.1, 1.I.A.3, 1.I.B.5, and 1.I.B.6
Important points in the lesson itself
- The basic design of this lesson supports ELLs by inviting them to apply what they have learned about using a checklist by giving and receiving feedback.
- ELLs may find the feedback and revision process challenging, because they will need to navigate reading work that is not theirs and attend to revisions based on the feedback of others. Make sure that ELLs understand the feedback and how to act on it (see levels of support and the Meeting Students' Needs column).
Levels of support
For lighter support:
- Preview the Unit 2 Assessment Revise and Edit Checklist.
For heavier support:
- Model using the Revise and Edit Checklist to revise a volunteer student's work. Display the revised version next to the original version and ask students to notice and share what is different about each one.
Universal Design for Learning
- Multiple Means of Representation (MMR): Continue to ensure that all students have access to the directions in each activity and feel comfortable with the expectations. Consider engaging in a clarifying discussion about the directions or creating an outline of the steps for each activity.
- Multiple Means of Action and Expression (MMAE): This lesson includes independent writing time, during which some students may need additional support building their writing stamina. Support them in building their persistence and effort by providing scaffolds that create an environment that is conducive to writing.
- Multiple Means of Engagement (MME): Support students in feeling successful with writing by allowing them to celebrate writing goals. Continue to celebrate students who meet their writing goals, whether they involve length of text or sustained writing time.
Vocabulary
Key: Lesson-Specific Vocabulary (L); Text-Specific Vocabulary (T); Vocabulary Used in Writing (W)
Review:
- compelling (L)
Materials
- "Two Sides of the Story" (from Lesson 2; one to display)
- Unit 2 Assessment Revise and Edit Checklist (from Lesson 8; one to display; see Assessment Overview and Resources)
- Unit 2 Assessment Opinion Paragraph (completed in Lesson 9; one per student)
- Pale Male research notebook (from Lesson 2; pages 4-5; one per student)
- Respectful Opinions anchor chart (begun in Lesson 5)
- Pinky Partners Protocol anchor chart (begun in Module 1)
- Vote with Your Feet Protocol anchor chart (new; teacher-created; see supporting materials)
- Opinion posters (one of each to display)
- Vote with Your Feet Protocol anchor chart (example, for teacher reference)
- Module Guiding Question anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 9; added to during the Closing; see supporting materials)
- Module Guiding Question anchor chart (begun in Unit 1, Lesson 9; example, for teacher reference)
Materials from Previous Lessons
New Materials
Assessment
Each unit in the K-2 Language Arts Curriculum has one standards-based assessment built in. The module concludes with a performance task at the end of Unit 3 to synthesize their understanding of what they accomplished through supported, standards-based writing.
Opening
Opening | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Engaging the Learner: "Two Sides of the Story" (5 minutes)
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Work Time
Work Time | Meeting Students' Needs |
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A. Revising and Editing Our Writing: Unit 2 Assessment Opinion Paragraph (15 minutes)
"I can revise and edit my opinion paragraph using a checklist."
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B. Pinky Partners Protocol: What's Your Opinion? (15 minutes)
"I can discuss my opinion about Pale Male's nest using a compelling reason to support my opinion."
"What is an opinion?" (what you think about something) "What is an important part of having an opinion?" (supporting it with a reason)
"What is a compelling reason?" (a reason that is powerful and convincing)
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C. Vote with Your Feet Protocol: What's Your Opinion? (15 minutes)
"What did you notice about how many people had a different opinion?" (Responses will vary depending on students' opinions.) "What did you notice about the reasons people chose to support their opinion?" (Responses will vary depending on students' reasons.) Conversation Cue: "How does our discussion add to your understanding of respect? I'll give you time to think and discuss with a partner." (Responses will vary.) |
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Closing & Assessments
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A. End of Unit Reflection (10 minutes)
"What was the question that the ornithologist wanted us to consider?" (Why do people have different opinions about birds?)
"Why should we care about birds?" (Responses will vary, but should reference caring for birds because they impact our lives.) Conversation Cue: "Who can add on to what your classmate said? I'll give you time to think." (Responses will vary.)
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