Writing and Argument Essay: Peer Critique with Rubric (Chapters 29-31, including synthesis of scenes in previous chapters) | EL Education Curriculum

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ELA 2012 G8:M2A:U2:L11

Writing and Argument Essay: Peer Critique with Rubric (Chapters 29-31, including synthesis of scenes in previous chapters)

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Long Term Learning Targets

  • I can write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence. (W.8.1)
  • I can produce clear and coherent writing that is appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (W.8.4)
  • With support from peers and adults, I can use a writing process to ensure that purpose and audience have been addressed. (W.8.5)
  • I can select evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. (W.8.9)
  • I can use correct capitalization, punctuation, and spelling to send a clear message to my reader. (L.8.2)

Supporting Targets

  • I can critique my partner's use of evidence using criteria from the To Kill a Mockingbird argument rubric.
  • I can revise my work by incorporating helpful feedback from my partner.
  • I can write an organized argument essay about To Kill a Mockingbird.
  • Add bullet: I can use correct punctuation in my Quote Sandwich.

Ongoing Assessment

  • Structured notes for Chapters 29, 30, and 31 (from homework)
  • Quote Sandwich for Peer Critique
  • Exit ticket

Agenda

AgendaTeaching Notes

1.   Opening

A.  Engaging the Writer and Review Learning Targets: Focus Questions from Homework (5 minutes)

2.   Work Time (35 minutes)

A.  Incorporating Evidence in an Argument Essay (20 minutes)

B.  Peer Critique Protocol (15 minutes)

3.   Closing and Assessment

A.  Preview Homework (5 minutes)

4.   Homework

A.  Work on Essay Planner

  • In this lesson, the idea of a "quote sandwich" is introduced. This is a way to help students understand that when they use evidence in an argument essay, they should always:

*    Introduce the quote with context so the reader is not confused about what is happening in the novel.

*     Include the quote.

*     Analyze the quote. This is where students show their thinking about how the quote develops the reasons and claim. This part is often where students struggle the most. To support them, there is language included in the Quote Sandwich guide, such as "this shows." Since students are learning this skill, the language used is meant to be easy for students to imitate. When they have mastered the analysis (the thinking in the writing), then they can begin to use more sophisticated transitions (the craft in the writing).

  • This lesson includes peer critique. Critiques simulate the experiences students will have in the workplace and thus help build a culture of achievement, collaboration, and open-mindedness in your classroom. Students engaged in a different peer critique structure in Module 1 when the provided Stars and Steps for the "Inside Out" poems.
  • This peer critique protocol is similar to the Praise-Question-Suggest protocol (see Appendix 1). That is done intentionally to build student capacity.
  • In advance: Consider creating a peer critique packet for each student that includes the Quote Sandwich guide, Quote Sandwich for Peer Critique, Peer Critique Expectations and Directions, and Peer Critique recording form in order to make distributing papers more efficient.
  • Students are introduced to the Essay Planner at the end of this lesson. Each space for planning the body paragraphs features room for three quote sandwiches, which reflects the space provided on the Supporting Evidence-Based Claims graphic organizer. You may wish to remind students that they may have two quote sandwiches instead of three in their body paragraphs since they should select the strongest evidence to support their reason.
  • Post: Learning targets.

Vocabulary

ellipsis, critique, incorporate feedback

Materials

  • To Kill a Mockingbird Argument rubric (one per student and one to display)
  • Document camera
  • Quote Sandwich guide (one per student)
  • Quote Sandwich for Peer Critique (one per student)
  • Peer Critique Expectations and Directions (on chart paper or on white board)
  • Peer Critique recording form (one per student)
  • To Kill a Mockingbird Essay planner (one per student)

Opening

OpeningMeeting Students' Needs

A. Engaging the Writer and Reviewing Learning Targets (5 minutes)

  • Students should sit with their selected Discussion Appointment partner. Be sure that they have their structured notes from their homework and invite students to work with their partner to share their response to the focus question on the homework:

*    What does Scout mean when she says, "Atticus was right. One time he said you never really know a man until you stand in his shoes and walk around in them. Just standing on the Radley porch was enough."?

  • Direct students' attention to the posted learning targets. Cold call on a student to read the learning targets.
  • Based on the exit ticket from Lesson 9, if any students did not understand how to write an argument essay, consider pulling a small group during this time.

Work Time

Work TimeMeeting Students' Needs

A. Analyzing Evidence in an Argument Essay (20 minutes)

  • Distribute and display To Kill a Mockingbird Argument rubric using the document camera. Tell students that it is based on the same rubric that was used to assess their essays in Module 1. Ask them to notice things that might be different from what they did in Module 1.
  • Cold call on students to share their ideas. Listen for: "The first row is focused on claim and reasons," "The word argument comes up a lot in the first two rows," "You have to explain how evidence supports your argument," "You have to acknowledge and respond to a counterclaim," and "The argument needs to be logical."
  • Point out that the Coherence, Style, and Organization Row and the Control of Conventions Row are exactly the same.
  • Be sure students have their novel, To Kill a Mockingbird. Distribute and display the Quote Sandwich guide on the document camera. Read it aloud and invite students to follow along silently. Point out that they did some analysis of the evidence in the model essay in the previous lesson, so this builds from that. Explain that all three parts of the quote sandwich are very important in order for the reader to understand the evidence and how it develops the reasons and the claim in the essay.
  • Ask students to get out their copies of the To Kill a Mockingbird model essay, reread the body paragraphs, and circle at least one other example of a quote sandwich. Invite them to turn and talk to a partner about what they circled and how it supports the reason in the body paragraph. Cold call on one or two pairs to share with the class. Listen for: "I found another quote sandwich in the first body paragraph. It shows how Mrs. Dubose held herself to high expectations," or "In the second body paragraph, the author uses a quote sandwich to show how brave Mrs. Dubose was to try to get over her drug addiction." Point out to students that using quote sandwiches helps the author logically develop her claim and reasons so that the thinking is clear to the reader.
  • Draw students attention to the first quote in the counterclaim paragraph, "She'd have spent the rest of her life on it and died without so much agony, but she was too contrary..." (147). Ask students if anyone knows what the three dots at the end of the quote are called, and why they are there at the end of the quote. Be sure students know these dots are called an ellipsis, which is used when omitting part of a quote. Invite students to locate another example of where an ellipsis is used in the concluding paragraph. Share with students that they may find it helpful to use the ellipsis when they quote from the novel.
  • Distribute and display the Quote Sandwich for Peer Critique.
  • Tell students that they will practice crafting a quote sandwich, then they will engage in a peer critique protocol today to get feedback on their quote sandwich.
  • Ask students to get out their Supporting Evidence-Based Claims graphic organizer that they worked on in the previous lesson. Prompt them to choose one reason to focus on, then one piece of evidence that supports the reason. Ask them to craft a quote sandwich.
     

B. Peer Critique Protocol (15 minutes)

  • When students have crafted their quote sandwiches, ask them to work with their seat partner for the peer critique protocol.
  • Remind students that peer critique reflects what people often do in their lives outside of school. In their work, people get feedback to improve. Also, giving feedback can often provide new ideas for one's own work.
  • Invite students to look at the Peer Critique Expectations and Directions. Review the expectations. Let students know that these four points are crucial for success:

Be kind: Always treat others with dignity and respect. This means we never use words that are hurtful, including sarcasm.

Be specific: Focus on particular strengths and weaknesses, rather than making general comments such as "It's good" or "I like it." Provide insight into why it is good or what, specifically, you like about it.

Be helpful: The goal is to contribute positively to the individual, not simply to be heard. Be sure your comments contribute to improving your partner's essay plan.

Participate: Peer critique is a process to support each other, and your feedback is valued!

  • Explain the steps for the peer critique. Emphasize that this is focused on their quote sandwich.
  • Ask students to give you a thumbs-up if they understand the directions or a thumbs-down if they aren't sure. Call on a student with a thumbs-up to explain again. Listen for the student to paraphrase the posted expectations and directions. If there is any confusion, clarify for the class.
  • Pass out the Peer Critique recording form. Tell students that they will focus their feedback using criteria from the To Kill a Mockingbird Argument rubric that focuses on claim, reasons, and evidence. Review the criteria and remind students that, for this feedback to be helpful, they should focus only on this specific area and should give lots of feedback. Pointing out misspelled words or incorrect punctuation will not be helpful at this point in the writing process.
  • As students are giving each other feedback, circulate around the room. Make sure they are focused on the criteria of the rubric focused on claim, reasons, and evidence. Consider using this time to address questions or support students who need it. 
  • Refocus the whole group. Acknowledge any students who demonstrated positive traits, such as accepting feedback openly, asking good questions, or giving thoughtful feedback in a kind manner.
  • Invite students to revise their quote sandwich by incorporating feedback. Point out that feedback may not always be helpful. It is up to the author to decide what feedback will help improve his/her work. Take this opportunity to informally look over students' work to make sure they are using the feedback well and focusing on annotating the boxes where they need to make changes.
  • Asking students to provide feedback to their peers based on explicit criteria benefits both students in clarifying the meaning of the learning target.
  • Consider pairing students who need extra support together. Then, during peer critique time, spend time working with those pairs.
  • If students need more support forming their claims and reasons based on the exit ticket from Lesson 10, pull a small group during this time

Closing & Assessments

Closing

A. Preview Homework (5 minutes)

  • Distribute the To Kill a Mockingbird essay planner. Point out that there is space for students to plan the five paragraphs of their essay: the introduction, the body paragraphs, and the conclusion. For homework tonight, explain that student should take home the Quote Sandwich guide and create the quote sandwiches for Body Paragraphs 1 and 2.

Homework

Homework
  • Plan Body Paragraphs 1 and 2 in the essay planner. 

Note: Before the next lesson, make sure students have access to their Grade 6-8 Expository Writing Evaluation rubric from Module 1. If the completed rubric is not accessible, provide a blank version of the rubric used in Module 1.

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